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Old 08-23-04, 10:50 PM   #1
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da champions of rap

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Da champ is here ready to mack hes back
wit no fear/ hit me baby like britney spears/
I dare you queers to come up here and blast
ya rhymes in deese ears/ ya flows is weard/
Lil' Drew here to bring ya to tears/ fresh off da
line wit a new engine and oiled gears/ I bring
you up to my level and smash you down so fast/
you'd think I was Rocky da way I knock you
on ya' ass/ we spittin' fire to bitches who hate/ ya
faker than fake/ at da top a my game shootin straghter than
straight/ I dont know its just a trait the way I spit
at this rate/ in a state/ of emergency when m.c.'s
is in a time of ergency/ my rhymes is perfect/ im
certain/ because I got deese dudes rockin' and da'
girls they be twurkin'/ and they all be on me like
Ms. Piggy on Kermit/ I get credit because you
probably read it/ I already said it/ bled it/ you fled it/
I write the illest shit ever and I make sure you
dread it/

lookin for feedback!!!
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Old 08-23-04, 10:54 PM   #2
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DAMN....that was fiya!!! wasnt expectin your new ass to drop sumthin like that!! LMAO...structure was hard to follow in some parts...but wutever its all good...nice shit keep droppin
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Old 08-23-04, 11:04 PM   #3
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thanks cuz, glad you like my shit
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Old 08-24-04, 03:00 PM   #4
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uppin' for feedback in dis bitch

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Old 08-24-04, 04:20 PM   #6
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aight, thats kool
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Old 08-24-04, 09:04 PM   #7
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ay yall', its hella people lookin but aint no one leavin nuthin'
c'mon yall'
leave some shit
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Old 08-24-04, 11:23 PM   #8
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uppin fo' feedback

cmon' yall
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Old 11-01-04, 08:40 PM   #9
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ay it was tight, but the structure was a little off. I give it a 7/10.
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Old 11-01-04, 08:47 PM   #10
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strait shit...

betta den alot of catz...

u gon be good...**note-11-01**
D.Truth sed it first yo!!

TRU STORY YO!!!

KEEP ELEVATIn
fix dat structure..it'll make it flow betta ya dig

hit up My Breathe Remix..in my siggy...

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Old 11-01-04, 09:42 PM   #11
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dis shit is hella old...i wrote it like a year ago...damn...
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Old 11-01-04, 09:45 PM   #12
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lmao...drop some new shit dawg!!! you aint dropped in hellaz!
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Old 11-02-04, 02:24 AM   #13
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That was aiight;not great. You can do better than that 7/10 keep dr[]PPen
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Old 11-02-04, 02:35 PM   #14
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real nice drop.8/10.u got skillz,keep em comin'
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