**Yo,this piece touches on alotta things about me,..first off i wanna say Rest In Peace to all who i lost,and second off,this explains how i feel and where I've come from and the point where I'm at today! If you don't like it,..oh well,criticeze it through a reply,lemme know what you think. All who like it,reply and lemme know. Get at me!**
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DeVine
When caskets close my eyes open to face a world of one less/
Is this a tests..or is reality a bitch to face followed by death/
Is my breath short or is words hard to find to explain this mess/
Lost many friends and family who were innocent, so why am i still left/
Did god bless my image as a survivor in this game, i'm soon to find out/
My life took wrong paths, put me deep in ditches, but luckily i climbed out/
I rose from depths wit' street wisdom, lucky to still be livin'/
Through struggle,drug dealin'-n-death encounters, a 2nd chance to me was givin'/
God gave me the strength to have a normal way of livin'/
Put out inner fire as i asked god to extinguish all my sinnin'/
He let me fit in a normal 17 yr old image, still to this day beg for his forgiveness/
Tell him to cleanse my soul, erase all of my fuckin' opinions/
Help me to rise-n-face life in the eyes to defeat all the worlds dominions/

DeVine
~Mind Theoriez~
*Reppin' Till The Day I Die*
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~R.I.P~
Larry Graham (Grandfather, suicide) 1926-1959
Bobbie Price (Uncle, suicide) 1957-1986
Jeremy Price (Cousin, murdered) 1982-2001
Rachael Graham (Aunt, raped-n-murdered) 1963-2000
Andre Patterson (Friend, overdose) 1984-2001
Carmine Leuro (Friend, overdose) 1983-2001
Brett Thompson (Friend, suicide) 1981-1999
Jason Smith (Friend, overdose) 1985-2002
Tommy Delose (Friend, overdose) 1984-2002
Michelle Wagner (Friend, died from cancer) 1982-2001
Greg Mitchell (Friend, overdose) 1985-2002
**May God Bless Them And Watch Over Their Souls**

up'n,..don't sleep

get at me wit' criticism,..feedback,..anything,..don't sleep! Up'n

damn, that was deep, i love reading ish like this good keep up the good work, shit had ill flow, and easy to read, only downfall lack of wordplay, other than that u get a "B"

r i p to ya friends and fam
100

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D.L.W

nice flow dawg, it was pretty deep. I give you props, i liked what u decided to do your verse on. Like lyrical said the only bad thing was the lack or wordplay but overall i liked it man.
Vote for my battle on VVV against DirtBoy.

Peaace

Yeah,i appreciate the replies and feedback. The wordplay did lack,but i just needed to get the shit off my chest ASAP,..ya know. I do a whole lot better wit' wordplay,but i was just spillin' some thoughts and feelin'. Preciate the replies and I'ma check out your battle dawg! Up'n dis shit!

DeVine
~Mind Theoriez~
*Reppin' Till The Day I Die*

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Condolences man, I dont put criticism or critique to ish like this, it was a strong piece and you delivered your emotions well, there was an amazing depth and this was very heart felt, keep ya head up, keep spitting and elevating...

Peez...