Dogg, All I Wanna Do Iz Chill With The Dead Prezidents//
You Best Call The F.B.I To Help You Out Cause You Got Murderd With No Evidence//
I Came In This Game Knowin I'm Gonna Suceed Cause I Got Slik Talkin n Street Intelligence//
Soon As I Picked Up The Mic I'm Seein DEAD PEOPLE Like Ah '6th Sense'//
Any Way Any Style, You Wanna Do Punches? Step In The Ring I'll Knock You Out Like Mike Tyson//
Lets Take It To The STREET I'll Fight-Ya Like M.Bison//
You Niggas Affraid Of 'THE GOD' So Ya Sleep With The Light-On//
Got A Lil Red Light On The Gat To Make Sure I Hit The Right-One//
I'm From The Hot Streets Of Orlando n Got Game On The Court Step Up n I'll Show You Magic//
Scream SHOTTA 3 Times n The Results Will Be TRAGIC//
Got J4P Rollin Wit' Me n We Spittin Thug Poetry/
We Gon' HUFF n We Gon' PUFF We Blowin Nigguhz DOWN//
Are ARSINAL's Bout Mo' Than Juss Lyrics So If The Words Dont Get Ya Your Gettin Hit With A Couple Rounds!


Blaaat Blaaaaat, J4P Where My Nigguhz At??
We Doin It Big Mayn, Somebody Better Holla!

Fixed The Structure As I'ma Do On EVERY Rhyme I Posted

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Aight Aight Look Mayne Fix Da Struture Though Mayne Its Wack Its Hardly I Cant Even Read It But U Got Good Flow But Fix Da Struture Mayne

~peace~

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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-

SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

P.S.A

COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM

Aight Check It Now n Tell Me If Datz Better Structure

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shotta you got some good rhymes out... i like em all keep it up...

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Aight Thanx Dogg, I Appreciate It, I Dropped Some Shit About Pac, Its Kinda Wack Rhymes But It Has Meanin, Check It Out n Gimme Some Feedback Homeboy

An Yo....Holla @ Me With Some Of Your Rhymes Dogg
Good Lookin
!!1!!

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gd shit shotta

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DUn duN dUn.......

Any Way Any Style, You Wanna Do Punches? Step In The Ring I'll Knock You Out Like Mike Tyson//
Lets Take It To The STREET I'll Fight-Ya Like M.Bison//

dis line wuz dope i like it but i needed dis post to vote ur battle wit EPEDEMIK but dis sheit wuz dope ima holla at cha latter tho

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people talk but who listens.......i dont give a shit wat u think.............u dont mean shit to me.........but if u do mean sumthing............wat u think can destroy me...............da reason why i hav hatred.........is cuz i LOVE so much

Likkle Shotta yuh nice no rass. My only advice is try to limit the "nigguhz" (though I see you didn't at all overdose off it at all) and the cursewords even in your thread titles; it can drown away the expectations of the audience and hide all that artistic potential/fyah you have going there.

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Aluta Continua.. Victory is certain!