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08-27-04, 01:29 PM | #1 | ||||||
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first poem
IP: FD9D 8A8F
people live they're lives with hapiness and prosperity
but the tides of lives do not give everyone easy, so sparingly some people must give all just to gain what is needed they might have might and an igenius mind, soulfully seeded but the heart of man, the fire that burn just to survive in a world where sooner or later eveything just dies is the only thing from keeping an idiot off the block end up a contender of life, he might be at the top because everthing falls, and they aint no point in crying because if your goals a percived you'll be smilling dying a lil lazy but just rate it |
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08-27-04, 09:45 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: FD9D 8A8F
wtf
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08-28-04, 01:16 AM | #3 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
it lacked the honesty and emotion , but otherwise i thought it was good, i should be able to feel the feelings of the author, but i didnt really, but otherwise i'll rate it 5 its average but nothing to special peace
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08-28-04, 02:48 AM | #4 | ||||
$Thug Life$
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IP: D111 CB97
yo we beefin in all but i gotta say you a betta poem writer than me peace out homie...
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08-28-04, 05:56 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 5676 F64A
yeah that was good and he is better than me 2 lol...
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