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07-06-02, 12:47 AM
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am I red-e for battle
IP: D06E 4720
I hope your red-e for the shit you started/
you got me seein' red visions of your head as a target/ cross-hairs got your wig split now you need a weeve/ extensions of complextion makin you bleed... you couldn't b a seed if you came out of my dick,and I planted you in the ground and tended to you with a ho and a pick. it wouldn't work son you will never grow/ I'm rollin-dubbs, you rollin TYCOS/(the little remote control cars) think I'm red-e for battle yet? FEEDBACK >>>>PLEASE |
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07-06-02, 03:21 AM
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IP: 1E42 CDA7
no i dont' think you are and i think you should umm... what is it called umm... rhyme well there's ya feedback hoffa
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07-06-02, 03:23 AM
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IP: 3348 74C0
na son......get mo practice
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07-06-02, 05:09 AM
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.Tha Open Mic King.
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IP: 1F1F E9DC
Aiight...Man, i think you really need to elevate your punching standards...None of em really caught my eye and made me think.."Shitz Was Dope"...nahmean?..try to add more imagery & originality to em..
Keep elevatin man.. Peace n god bless. |
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