Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 09:26 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

ruff_tuff_thug has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 08:57 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 08:58 PM.

yo man this is gonna be even so dont go over how many lines i have... which is 15...

you a pussy and you are as soft as lard...
battle me that isnt good you fuckin retard...
you a rapping shame and should leave the game...
you hate me so much dawg i feel the same...
you wear panties and bras like a fuckin queer...
you a bitch layin for doe and you stay away from here...
i'll smash you wit my rhymes and kill you wit my style...
its amazing that you punk ass will even last a while...
you gonna go to your fucckin grave and live in hell...
your skillz suck and they cant be good or repelled...
you a pussy callin a greater rapper then you a herb...
keep fuckin around and your gonna get killed and served...
believe me this is the word that made the rap game good...
i do good and dont fuck around and do wut i should...
you cant beat me and you neva will and neva can...
i could kill you with no weapons and only one fuckin hand...


aight bitch even it up...

This dude is wack...ready


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He says he's a thug, but this cat talkn soft
Probably looks at Idlyyic Queens photo's just to get off (he's on her nuts
...His crews so wack it should be labeled a sin
Its sad when you gotta pay the pussies , just to get a win
...I could spit a bar and kill this guy
I dont need no sick punches, my personals will gimme 5 (votes)
One-Band-Man continously clowned him many times here
Yo crew gets clowned also, who's droppn the real rhymes
This is facts, fuck punches, nigga just fall down
Since yo names a bluff, i'll substitute it with pronouns*
6-15, good choice on not showing your stats
Battled yo own crew cat and lost, cause your wack
...Look, yo life is animated, just like yo sig
I'll disconnect yo brain...like a black girls wig

*names are nouns...pronouns substitute em

yo at least i can admit i can take a loss you cant... hahahaha...

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dawg if i lose its cause i made myself or the person was just better than you...do me a favor...admit this loss before it happens

Clearly J DOT took this, he was all over the personals. Flow was about even and shit, and I think ruff tuff thug and J dot both needed a lil better structure. J Dot just came wit the punches hard, and wordplay was ncie too.

Voted For: J DOT

ok:
ruff tuff~your verse was good,your flow was ok, but your words seemed to be forced into little space, which is hard to do, overall decent punches and nice structure....
jdot~your verse was very well done, you had nice flow, strong punches, and good personals, nice battle, i liked your last couple of lines, very funny........nice job

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um uppin...

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uppin...

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i murdered you...i read that like 10 times already...wow!!!
see wut shit talkn do, you 17 year old homo thug

checkin battle........................................

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left...2 many herbs

the first kid was aight, but he lacked the hard punches i like to see in a verse. J dot was clearly better, with a substantial amount of personals compared to his opponents lack of them. vote - j dot. hit this up plz.

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