Voted For: ProVerse

wow, this was hard to judge but heres my verdict:
you both had great flow and styles all your own, both rode the topic well............
flow~your verse was good, you told a nice story type verse and nice rhyme skill as well, keepin it on track, nice job overall
Proverse~your verse was kind of short, but not short on detail and imagery with your words, nice job squeezing content into a short space,shows skill, i liked your ending and the rhyme scheme you used.............both did very well on this, much respect for you both, no hate whatsoever, i just love reading topicals, but i vote for^^^^

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Voted For: ProVerse

ok this is funny cuz your name is flow but pro had the flow here pro this is the best i ever saw from you good ass wordplay vocab and flow here a really hot verse structure was up to par as well 8/10
flow your shit was good too nice vocab and i liked your imagery here but vocab was not as good as pros nor was flow or wordplay he had that and that made his verse better7/10
no hate a real nice battle close here but i think pro had a better verse return the honesty

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iight uppin for some more votes^^^

thax for the ones i already got

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k uppin yet another time

hope i get soem votes this time

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Voted For: ProVerse

Not bad, both yall.

Pro had it, It flow'd a little better, His rhyme scheme was good, It was more interesting.

The opener was good in flow's, but most of ur verses were too simple, and some lines lost me for a while.

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Turnheads Grafix

Turnheads Vs CODEE [5-1]
Me clownin Nomercy

Voted For: ProVerse

proverse got it...betta overall content...betta flow...and betta punches...

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^^wat the hell there isnt any punches in a topical...

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

Voted For: flow2crazy

no hate on proverse cuz i battled flo 2

but y0o i was feelin flo ya shit wasnt relli that great wen it came ta rhymin but ya flow was off the hook and the story line was nice it went from u sayin damn that could b me to sayin another kid was sayin it lookin up to u like u did to sum rappa it was hott and i felt it nice drop

proverse ya shit was more street and there was no real story line ya rhymin was hot but wen u battle on topic it has ta have a story of sum sort thas y im givin it to flo

vote=flow2crazy

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thanx uppin...

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The Council

the new testamin ft. anxiety (must see)

Bubba Bible Ft. Ajax[/SIZE]

Voted For: ProVerse

man thats some hot shit on both sidez......far out nice battle.
man u both had mad rhymes but i connected with pro's more..... " its not even been a while sinced i frowned- anything it takes_
to for you to feel me- even if it means releasin every track
i'm my cd- you gonna see me- even if it kills me- " love that shit man reat battle
v/ pro - flow man u were so close i give u huge propz homie...

^thanx for votin dawg

uppin for more votes

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Voted For: ProVerse

ProVerse
structure is good.. flow is on target.. tight multis.. imagery was decent.. could have been better, though the topic didnt allow for much.. emotion was pretty good.. like in the last line.. good shit.. this topic didnt allow you to go at it in a creative way, but u still managed it well..

flow2crazy
structure is good.. flow falls off a little.. u had a few multis.. imagery wasnt very good.. cause as i said previously, this topic doesnt allow for much.. u attempted to put in emotion, but it didnt come out right.. even though the topic couldnt get made into a creative way, u werent able to manage a dope verse..

Overall
Both had a good structure.. both had decent imagery.. ProVerse had the more stable flow.. more multis.. better emotion.. and he went about the topic better.. so basing off of that.. ProVerse gets my vote..

VOTE - PROVERSE

^thanx for votin dawg

uppin for some more votes

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Voted For: flow2crazy

vote flow...

feel in to it....flow
flow: flow (lol)
thought into it: flow
i could relate to flows in a way thats why he won

proverse..you really need to work on ur structure...thats wut killed you..n nest time make urs longer

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