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Old 09-02-04, 04:05 PM   #1
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Inside The Club

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Inside The Club

Got pride as a thug inside the club collide with love
Like Billy Dee oh silly me saw some thighs wanted to rub
Take her hand get cake is my plan like Betty Crocker
Ready for proper recipe; breast be poking hoping for sweaty hotter
Sex, like the tail of a kite this female is right tonight, true sight
Reveals a brown round butt, Royal Crown in my cup this boo is tight
Use money to amuse this honey like I’m a big shot
Dig this spot her wig is hot seven days a week I gig a lot
Girl softer than mink “boo let me offer you a drink”? Not
Lying I’m buying, her body true, “well then Bacardi boo”
“Waitress please bring a glass fast girl we’re going to Hardee’s too
Boo with you the world in mine girl you fine” “MADD you
Hurl lines toward sex yet we just met and that’s sad too”
Girl your body emits sweet fumes to legit street tunes played
By the DJ he stay scratching and snatching hearts to persuade
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Old 09-02-04, 04:44 PM   #2
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nice it needs work tho,,,...
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Old 09-02-04, 06:44 PM   #3
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this was nice...nice multies and flow...structure was fine...so this was a pretty good drop...
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Old 09-02-04, 11:54 PM   #4
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Thanks For The Props And Critique Yall For Real
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