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Old 09-06-04, 08:28 AM   #1
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Exclamation Merkin Academy (GangstarShit Diss)

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Man, This Nigguh Gon' Make Me Do This Again..

....Man Fuck This Nigguh.....

*Welcome To The Merkin Academy...
....This Aint No Game So Stop Trynna Play-me....
...I Murder Wanksters Like You DAILY..
..I Got Rhymes, Six Nines An I'm UNTOUCHABLE..
...Stop Bendin Over U Bitch n Nigguhz Will Stop FUCKIN-YOU..!*
Chorus ^^

This Fagg DickRides So Much Everday Ya Wake Up With A Man NEXT-TO-YOU..
...I'ma Give U Ya Wish n Cut Ya Dick Off So Hey...Now Your A TRANSEXUAL..!

U Got A Scholarship InTo The MERKIN ACADEMY..
After I'm DoNE Rippin You LYRICALLY, I'ma Have My Boys Ready n Waitin To ''BLASPHEMY''

Man, I'm Fresh To 'Death' Fuck Lyrics I'ma Teach U Sign LANGUAGE........Cause U So Emotional The Middle Finger Does Enuff DAMAGE...

You Silly 'Gangster'....Only Thang You Pull Is Your DICK..
U Got A Sexual Relationship Wit Your Hand Trynna Pass It Off As Yo' TRICK..
U Couldnt Get Pussy From A Nymph With No Teeth Thats Been Decleared A LUNATIC..
My Rhyme'll Leave U 'Clueless' Like A Dyslesic Kid Trynna Do ARITHMETIC..

Man, I Dont Think U Even Own A Gun Or Got Any Homies, So Before U Call Yourself A GANGSTAR, Do The RESEARCH...
...This Diss Proves Your My Bitch n It Was Confirmed When U Said ''MASTER U RANG''...Like Lurch..
When I'm Done Wit'chu, Only Place U Gon' Be Accepted Is CHURCH...

This Is A BattleSite Not A CockBar U Homo......
...U Faggot, Its Time U 'BOUNCE' Like A Fuckin LoLo...



*Welcome To The Merkin Academy...
....This Aint No Game So Stop Trynna Play-me....
...I Murder Wanksters Like You DAILY..
..I Got Rhymes, Six Nines An I'm UNTOUCHABLE..
...Stop Bendin Over U Bitch n Nigguhz Will Stop FUCKIN-YOU..!*
Chorus ^^


Who Knows What Gon Happen On The Second Verse...
I'm Spittin This From The Dome When It Took U Like 3 Days To REHEARSE..

Lil Chickenshit, U More 'YELLA' Than A Lakers Jersey...
Get Up Off Yo Knees Bitch n Stop Beggin For-Mercy..
...I Bring Nothin But Controversy..

...An Ya'll Better Hide Yo Rhymes Cause This Fake Gangstar Will Prolly ROBB-THEM....
U Shouldda Never Have Called My Name Cause I'm More Than Juss A PROBLEM...

Man, All I Know Is Your Mommas Pussy Infested Wit More 'CRABS' Than A Crips GROUPIE..
I'ma Be All Up On U Like A Rash n To Move Me U Best SHOOT-ME..

I'm So Sick I Thought After Watchin Me Diss U So Much U Wouldda Caught Some Style Like A DISEASE..
...Guess It Wasnt To Be, But That Still Dont Mean U Have To Scream Like ''O SOMEBODY HELP ME, PLEASE!!''

U Made This Personal..
I Couldda Been Like Whatever Instead Of Emotionally Hurtin-you..

Man, U Messin With A VIOLENT-TYPE..
I'ma Leave U More 'HOLY' Than The 'SILENT-NIGHT'...

I Got Punch 4 Weeks n The Only Thang U Serve Is The Non Alcholic LIQOUR..
If U Diss Me, U Get It Rite Back But Much Worse NIGGA..
Whatever The Fuck U Bring I Bring It Too But Only 10 Times BIGGER..!!!

*Welcome To The Merkin Academy...
....This Aint No Game So Stop Trynna Play-me....
...I Murder Wanksters Like You DAILY..
..I Got Rhymes, Six Nines An I'm UNTOUCHABLE..
...Stop Bendin Over U Bitch n Nigguhz Will Stop FUCKIN-YOU..!*
Chorus ^^


............How Many Times I Gotta Do This?
Damn, I Had My Fun Nah This Nigguh Borin Me...
Fake Ass GANGSTAR Trynna Be Sumthin He Aint..

Fuck This Gay Phoney..I'm OUT...
............................................P E A C E
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Old 09-06-04, 09:11 AM   #2
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aight quit text,learn how ta construct good personal punches n go do audio...
thats my advice to you cause ya had so many forced rhymes in there...
might get away with it in audio but not text......
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Old 09-06-04, 10:19 AM   #3
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Well, There Wasnt An UNFORCED Rhyme In There...

You Need'a HOP Up Off Me Cause Everythin I Drop U Got Sumthan Bad To Say About It...

So If U Got A Problem Quit Bein A Bitch n HOLLA..
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Old 09-06-04, 11:01 AM   #4
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Remember when i win u'll be needin to goto merkin academy lol what a fool he makes an open mic like this to me when we have an open mic wit a name like this!

Obviously not much thought went into this...oh well
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Old 09-06-04, 11:04 AM   #5
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what the hell?

man shut the hell up n quit talkin bullshit

your heads so far up ya ass u spittin bullshit....

now shut the fuck up n stop makin up senseless garbage that nobody cares about...
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Old 09-06-04, 11:10 AM   #6
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When i win ur goin to merkin academy aight 5-0 on it's way ha ha u betta start askin sum peeps wit over 200 posts coz ur lil d/r clique aint gonn help ya now!
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Old 09-06-04, 11:28 AM   #7
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I Aint Even In A Clique.......
An FUCK That Battle, To Be Honest I Thought That Was Over A While Ago, Cough*Cause of u dick ridin......

But Yo, I Merked U With This Diss Thats Why Your Bringin Up The Battle...

Nigguh Be Gone..

I Aint Got Time 4 Dick Ridin' Bitches....
.............................P E A C E
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Old 09-06-04, 11:52 AM   #8
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i don't always say bad shit.....here....next to you/transexual...???? forced n doesnt work............launguage/damage..forced aint working.....
thats why i said quit text n try audio....openmic is to be critiqued not ta have noobs n vets all over your dick, sayin ahh man that shit was hot...any1 can say that shit,its pickin out wats wrong with ya verse n speakin on it...most peeps don't like doin that,if you don't like wat i say don't post in openmic...simple as that n im not hatin or pickin sides so don't get it twisted kid.....lean the fuck back n if you reply with some beef shit your gonna have problems....if not we koo n jus drop the issue...other than wat i pointed out it had decent flow....
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Old 09-06-04, 11:58 AM   #9
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No F'Real, U ALWAYS Got Sumthin Bad To Say About People...

An THIS AINT Beef, I Know U Aint No Dickryder, An I Only Got Hate 4 Dickryders Like This Dumb Fuck Gangstarshit....
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Old 09-06-04, 12:05 PM   #10
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in my eyes telling people wat there doin right is'nt a way of helping them,
tell them wat there doin wrong n they'll focus on that rather than them focusing on wat there doin right which doesnt need improvment......

see if i wouldve said your vocabs good n your structure aight...

guarenteed you'd be focusin on your rhymes n lines which in reality arent the pieces that need work.....bring wats wrong to a persons attention n it'll stick with em....
prays them n they'll jus get a big head..........philosophy 101
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Old 09-06-04, 12:15 PM   #11
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I see you had some pretty good disses in it though,,,
So i'll give you a 7 out of ten,,,
but who am i to say i guess its really up to you to believe what it is,,
Always believe in your self no mater what,,,nice drop,,,,1


feed back wouldn't hurt any one,,,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764
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Old 09-06-04, 01:38 PM   #12
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this wasnt very good.. work on structure.. peace..
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