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Back at Ya....lil keystyle....
IP: 5F15 F06C
It's been so long, I'm not sure if I can spit/
But that's alright, I ain't scurred by the fit/ Of rage, that Satan put me through/ Sittn in the Jail cell, but now you know I'm through/ No mas gang-bangn/ No mas cat slangn/ God showed me I got more to live for/ Un amigo showed me the WORD, I bout hit the floor/ Now let me bust in Espanol/ Tu sabes que Dios es mi hombre/ Pero cuando usted pregunta algunos, ellos dicen no se/ Did ya get it, or is it up over your head/ All I know, is I'm bout to go lay in my bed/ So now I'm askn for some respect from ya'll/ Who knows, I might even cruise up to the mall What ya'll think? Whackness? It's a keystyle so I get some slack...haha |
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IP: F85A C4D6
nice work, you said you haven't been spitting in a while also, so more slack there, peace kid don't forget to check that ish...peace nice work
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IP: 1603 FD43
it was coo lil piece all u need to do is elevate on yo vocab...check my peice 2 dawg holla...
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BANNED: Cheater
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IP: A604 EE64
i need to elevate
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IP: 123B 6E1A
It Was Straight
Though It All Depends On How Long You Been Spittn ? |
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IP: 0227 574C
"So now I'm askn for some respect from ya'll/
Who knows, I might even cruise up to the mall/" was a bit of a poor ending to an alright peice, the spanish was a nice touch, but the flow was ok though and the whole thing was a bit short to really mean anything, I didnt really feel it. |
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