It's hard for me to trust wit so much goin on'
it's crazy when I know I ain't the only cute chick wit a thong'
this is why i'm writin this song to let u know what the deal is'
I'm sure u can kinda relate somehow u gotta feel this'
trust is a two way thing but sometimes I feel it's not there'
sometimes ur kinda like cancer leavin me wit no hair'
callin ur phone and shit nigga i kno it's not ILL'
but real is real nigga and for real that bitch needs to be killed'
I was on some crazy shit when I heard a voice opposite of mine'
fuck it maybe ur not my soul mate are u sendin me a sign'
faggot I hate u why r u even part of me'
fuck Ja rule Love is pain can't u see'
so i'm writtin u this joint full of emotions'
so if u really love me show me ur full of devotion'

Esteban,
I know some of the lines are a little corny, but I wrote this in less than 5 minutes. I just had to find a way to express our situation, so just bare with me and remember its my raw feelings.

"c"

pretty good i don't like the length i just got in to it and it was over besides that i thought it was a dope peice

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Yea this was a nice piece too.. I like this better than the last one.. obviously it could improve, but im sure you know that... try using some more meta's and similies..

I was feelin this bar
"trust is a two way thing but sometimes I feel it's not there'
sometimes ur kinda like cancer leavin me wit no hair' "

keep Rhymin and Elevatin... 1...

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History has a bad habit of repeating itself. Learn from the events that took place Within the Gathering of Shadows.....

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yo this joint is not C.F.C it's (C of 2Versatile)

Yo let me get some more responses!

(C) 2Versatile