some played punches but overall i liked it,was a bit short though....
but ya gotta agree wit ya opinion mostly...lmao at trash droppers

check this out n leave some feedback intro
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149301

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

this was iight ..pretty short read.... some punchlines like daz were really played...structure was good..and i liked it but i didnt like the orange font...overall nice drop...alittle short...but keep it up nice

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word joka means alot comen from you bein a vet on here an one of tha best on origanal uppin...

Definatly shows potential bro.. Good shit.


The wordplay was pretty dope.

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thankz.......uppin

numerous verbal shots to tha head extract your "lobe"
this kid couldnt "cprogress" in tha win colum if he was "mod"
/\ the way i say it...don't rhyme

cut holes in this kids style like a "c-section"
tear his eyeballs out an put em in my mic so he can "see perfection"
/\ flow a lil off

i'll get inside his head and interact with his "brain" "cell's"
this kid couldnt have a decent flow if he "drained" "well's"
/\ if i drained a well there would be no flow so u shoulda worded it better

screw tha punches tha personal's are "irellivent"
name'n your selves shottaboy an gangstarshit lmfao how "intelligent"
/\ ok closer but the 2nd line again coulda been better

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