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09-14-04, 09:43 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Never Let Em' See You Sweat!!!!a Must Peep!!!!!!
IP: 0ABC 464B
Ghetto star!!! I'm Savo Escobar
Nigga spit ya credentials, drivin impressious cars Stashbox for da pistol, FLAWLESS ain't just my squad We fill cigars, and don't fuck wit STRESS at all From the neck ta arm, necklace charm, Rolex the arm 15 secs. ta bomb, don't check me best check ya broad I ain't upset at all, I hit the project...and BALL I'm tryin ta set it off, fuck em' wit 5 hits of raw ...Yes YALL!!! when a dogg thats less barks in Juvenile Hall I was snuffin niggaz out in Mess Hall My lifes been real fucked up, I must confess yall But the devil ain't goin get the best, he'll never see me sweat at all (chorus) On the streets in Carolina, niggaz actin a mess So strap ya Teks, and don't get caught without ya vest Only a bitch nigga ride for the West So run with the best, and never let a nigga see you sweat Well I stay strictly spittin these facts, just relax My nigga chill, take a seat... and just sit on back Nigga this is my world, so I plan to have it my way I run this shit, niggaz that talk shit gotta pay I'll be gone for the day,where them gangstaz slang them thangs We grab 4 4's and go on the attack, after dismay Wit a vision on my mind makin feddy increase I'm unique, you can tell by the way that I speak I break bitches, while I make bitches bow to my feet I shake bitches while I'm takin they bread on 20 inches Its crunch time...niggaz won't hesitate ta bust ni9es We on the FrontLines, but tryin ta hide from 1 time I'm out ta get mine,.......BITCH FOREAL!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm in the field, this nigga here's on a mission ta keel (kill) I'm wise and still young, makin large amounts of sums Its real shit, I was raised where the killers come from (chorus) On the streets in Carolina, niggaz actin a mess So strap ya Teks, and don't get caught without ya vest Only a bitch nigga ride for the West So run with the best, and never let a nigga see you sweat
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I SPIT FLAMES//BEAT NIGGAZ LIKE RICK JAMES//FORGET AIM//CAUSE LIKE POSI-TRACTION I GRIP THINGS PSA TAKIN OVER!!!!!!!!!!! |
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09-15-04, 11:36 AM | #2 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 28AD 5545
Your flow was good( See I hate reading shit that u cant decipher the flow from, while u readin it.) It painted good pictures as well, I was able to visualize what u talked about with no problem. It definitely wasnt boring reading either, it kept my attention all the way through. Yah it was definitely good reading, and look like u could put this to the right trak and have somethin. So I give u 10/10 on this one, for sho.
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09-15-04, 03:41 PM | #3 | ||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
Ghetto star!!! I'm Savo Escobar
Nigga spit ya credentials, drivin impressious cars Stashbox for da pistol, FLAWLESS ain't just my squad We fill cigars, and don't fuck wit STRESS at all From the neck ta arm, necklace charm, Rolex the arm 15 secs. ta bomb, don't check me best check ya broad I ain't upset at all, I hit the project...and BALL I'm tryin ta set it off, fuck em' wit 5 hits of raw ...Yes YALL!!! when a dogg thats less barks in Juvenile Hall I was snuffin niggaz out in Mess Hall My lifes been real fucked up, I must confess yall But the devil ain't goin get the best, he'll never see me sweat at all (chorus) On the streets in Carolina, niggaz actin a mess So strap ya Teks, and don't get caught without ya vest Only a bitch nigga ride for the West So run with the best, and never let a nigga see you sweat ^^^^^^^^^^^^ I LIKE DIS PART OF DA VERSE CAUSE IT GAVE ME TO PAINT DA PICTURE IN MY MIND AND TELLING ME WHATS GOING ON. Well I stay strictly spittin these facts, just relax My nigga chill, take a seat... and just sit on back Nigga this is my world, so I plan to have it my way I run this shit, niggaz that talk shit gotta pay I'll be gone for the day,where them gangstaz slang them thangs We grab 4 4's and go on the attack, after dismay Wit a vision on my mind makin feddy increase I'm unique, you can tell by the way that I speak I break bitches, while I make bitches bow to my feet I shake bitches while I'm takin they bread on 20 inches Its crunch time...niggaz won't hesitate ta bust ni9es We on the FrontLines, but tryin ta hide from 1 time I'm out ta get mine,.......BITCH FOREAL!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm in the field, this nigga here's on a mission ta keel (kill) I'm wise and still young, makin large amounts of sums Its real shit, I was raised where the killers come from (chorus) On the streets in Carolina, niggaz actin a mess So strap ya Teks, and don't get caught without ya vest Only a bitch nigga ride for the West So run with the best, and never let a nigga see you sweat ^^^^^^^^^^^ YO IT FELT LIKE U WAS TRYIN TO TAKE AN GANG TURF/ BUT DIS WAS COOL MAYE KEEP AT IT MAYNE DIS SHIT GOT=FLOW,PAINTS A PICTURE,NICE MAYNE COMING SOON FROM DA POET= ALONE CHECK DAT OUT COMING SOON |
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09-15-04, 04:43 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: D26C 0847
that shit was tight to me
im still new to this portion of the game-online freestylin on paper but i liked it |
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