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09-16-04, 10:29 AM | #1 | ||||
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Outlaw Poet Ft-tupac (sik)
IP: 3240 794D
"Outlaw" ["My Ambitions of a Ridah" Beat by Tupac
I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// I'm tellin you I give no mercy// you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally// I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// I'm tellin you I give no mercy// you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally// I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// I'm tellin you I give no mercy I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw! I'm an Outlaw, I'm fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw! I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// [Verse 1] My nigga I'm tired of the way they treatin me// I'm about to go full blast on the niggas make em sleep// I try to positive but they won't let it work// trippin over my lyrics which is just absurd// now what I can do is straight up kill you// come up in your crib let my niggas drill you// you may have thought I was optimist, but that's in the past// you on the ground gettin roughed by someone who's changed fast// maybe a few years ago you would want to get my ass kicked// a few years laters I leave these bitches in their caskets// yea that's right, it's not Michael Withers anymore// it's a changed mutha fucka walkin through that door// cock it back bang bang, yea he's well hurt// layin in the dirt, blood splattered on his shirt// a feared mutha fuck, yo I'm nothin less// better wear your vest, I told you mayn I'm an Outlaw// I don't take shit, even if you was my kin// niggas know it, I'll bust some Jason shit on your men// too many cowards on the street come and try to test me// they learn the hard way I'll put it simply// it's a sad thing, when your all alone, just you// by yourself, it's the pride that flows in you// tryna start beef yea it's a cold thing// I show them off with the Pop Pop Bang Bang// you really think I give a damn if you hurt// there's too many demons in my brain that lurk// Common sense man, I told how I've change // guess what, . . . I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw// I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// I'm tellin you I give no mercy// you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally// [Verse 2] You commin back for more who the hell do you think you is?// I'm like Mike Lowrey except I don't live in bliss// cold-hearted, thats what everyone sees me ass// well then guess what nigga I don't give a fuck about your ass// and you cops y'all need to stop that brutality// y'all acted like pussies when you heard from Ice-T// a heart dark, as the color of black// it seems everyday I need to watch my back// An Outlaw, so I don't give a hell// I ain't scared to die I already know I'm goin to hell// Lord I ask for forgivness and please show me the light// I've done too much sinnin in my mutha fuckin life// My sides, are hard all over// no time for a side of a nigga bein sober// leavin mothers mournin their son with sad tears// get ready to fear, I told you mayn I'm an Outlaw// I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// I'm tellin you I give no mercy// you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally// [Verse 3] the niggas know it, I don't give a fuck// but when the beef comes I make all these niggas duck// beefin with some pussies I don't even know// due to this bitch that acts like a sophisticated ho// I need to forgive but yo I just can't forget// I wish that day never happened where we met// I'm gettin through the hatin, but theses pussies don't// when they see in da real all they do is damn choke// my own friends have been shocked by my sudden changes// it's da anger inside that makes me leave them hangin// I'm a menace, that's why you can't finish// what you did in the past cuz I'll come and kill this// it's a shame the way I got caught up in the mix// rest in peace Pac, you still thuggin in the bricks// Renegades and Soldiers told yall how I was// it was a hit, but some still didn't get the message cous// my image scarin some of these niggas thoughts// when are you gonna be a man and finish what you sought// it's my image scarin some of these niggas thoughts// when are you gonna be a man and finish what you sought// the moral of the story is to leave me alone// go on with your bussiness, cuz I'm a mutha fuckin Outlaw// I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// I'm tellin you I give no mercy// you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally// I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// I'm tellin you I give no mercy// you got beef you'll be sleepin eternally// I'm an Outlaw, I'm a fuckin Outlaw, you don't want to fuck with me// |
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09-16-04, 11:14 AM | #2 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
Aiiiight, not bad homeboy, not bad at all...
the third verse came strongest, nice lyrical content, nice mix of punches, real lyrics an some gangsta shit too, chorus is nice,, overall a decent drop that u should be proud of, i personally loved it, 8/10, keep em comin poet
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09-16-04, 12:44 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: 3240 794D
Aight Danx Yo Uppp Dis Shit Lookin For Some More Feedback
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09-16-04, 01:10 PM | #4 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: 7ABC 057B
yeah this was good
Like shotta said, best parts came from ya third shit, Not bad for a remix peice, usually these suck But yeah i give it a 8.2 outta 10
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09-16-04, 01:34 PM | #5 | ||||
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O Aight Danx Ice Pick Yo More Feed Uppin
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