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09-25-04, 09:02 PM
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turn my music high-vol.1 of Pro freestyles
IP: 0825 899A
Turn my music--- High,HIgh,HIGh,HIGH yer--
another post of printings... I wrote for you to indulge veiw the lyrics...you feel it I know... becuse its dope I Sound bound of my self...kinda Cocky but you like me though see my heart outside...external vision... get the thermal sensors cuz when they turned on.... comin is them homing missles hot spit collision...don't agree check my collab with quit witted!!!  and print it!!...and change and take credit and extend it... compared to me...the remix'll be hurroundous unless i'm in it Turn my music--- High,HIgh,HIGh,HIGH yer-- Re-Read the Verse twice...to see the still rising price... of shock value I Pile too you....you will pay for this site crush your "choppy" rhymes till they "diced"...i'm quite tight if you don't agree you have no insight...holding down my mic though I keep it high....even while in flight....no bites for you... if you acn't handle me...only BITE wat you can chew!!!... this site got me moving dudes...how much can pro prove to you... skip the hype and just take my advice..jus turn my music high.. Turn my music--- High,HIgh,HIGh,HIGH yer-- Blow through you dudes like my city windy skies.. My head focused right now like the hair that diddy has (mohawk) any class I pass is only past tense..to convice you... I brag (BEAT GOES OFF!!!!!!!!!!!!!) about my past prints...no lies...any lies...deserve cindyflies (poison toung) put down your kicks and walk through my footprints that Lie Fuuk this shit, I spit even if yaw niggas don't critise!!!!! PEACE
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09-25-04, 09:15 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
uppin for some crits
please 
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09-25-04, 09:21 PM
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IP: C3E2 BC70
^ hey yo man it was tight....jus some bits of 1st verse were off beat and didnt make any sense bt verse 2 was tight. Peace check my battles
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09-25-04, 09:38 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
see my heart outside...external vision... get the thermal sensors
cuz when they turned on.... comin is them homing missles ^ homing missles have HEAT sensors get it now? thanks for the crit peace
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09-25-04, 09:43 PM
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..:Merking Mc's:..
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IP: 666C F77E
hot shit proverse, i expected nothing less from ya, looking forward to a remix and more collabs with ya
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09-26-04, 02:12 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
upping for critisism on my collection
of words combined into a rhyming scripture of an hip hop nature...in a time period of 0.0 seconds if that is possible to create please
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09-26-04, 05:28 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
uppin please
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09-26-04, 06:00 PM
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IP: D26C 0847
that was pretty good...i couldnt really follow along very well though....5/10...1
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09-26-04, 06:10 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
5/10 aint good
that's terrible  thanks for critin tho pc
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