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View Poll Results: Soulless vs. Empire
Soulless 4 44.44%
Empire 5 55.56%
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Old 09-28-04, 12:35 AM   #16
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wow...this was a tight battle...one of the best i've seen in awhile....

Soulless - nice drop...pretty solid structure, good flow the whole time, some good punches and personals, cept you did use the same punch twice so it kinda loss effect....im talking about the record changing...you best line was definately your last line with the "best punch you ever had" haha that left me laughing...very good closer..i dunno you came pretty damn hard, and you had some peretty solid vocab on some of those lines...im gonna give your verse a 8.5/10

Empire - wow...multi heaven...hell of a drop i must say, punch after punch after punch...it felt like i was gettin hit in the face with your punches...some pretty damn good personals in there...gotta love the NSYNC punch hahahaha, so good...Damn fool like Ja-Rule only thing youmurder is INK so stop wowling
You so soft in ya crib beating off to the cover of ya N'SYNCE album....i have to say your structure and flow was great too, with some solid vocab all around...this is one of the greater drops ive seen....overal 9/10

v/empire...amazing drop...close close battle

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Old 09-28-04, 07:26 PM   #17
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uppin.......


lets get soem votes on this...
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Old 09-29-04, 04:48 PM   #18
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i think empire did better in this. he had better punches n a good flow. his vocab coulda bin a lil beter. his personals were pretty hot to. i kno he coulda came alot harder tho but...

my vote=empire
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Old 09-30-04, 04:04 AM   #19
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Empire
Nice punches some of them were played and some of them were original some pretty nice multi's and meta's ya wordplay was ehh ok i guess u can up that a lil and ya punches kinda made me laugh so thats a plus ya structure was damn near horrible u gotta fix that pronto
overall i gave ya drop a 7/10


Souless
u had damn near flawless structure but it looked a lil stretched at times u had ok multis and ya personals were ok but ya punches is where u lost this one at it was like u were tryin 2 get them 2 hit but they werent connecting like u were tryin 2 hard try 2 put a lil humor into ya verse
overall 5/10'

this was an ok battle came down 2 overall better punches

no hate jus truth


nuff said
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Old 09-30-04, 07:28 AM   #20
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aight uppin...

--- isn't a battle about personals...

not punches people have heard before....

i hate to be bitchin... but 4 real... thsi is not a 3-1 battle... more like 3-3....


i dunno it jsut seems like these votes are coming with facts...

blah blah...

uppin for more votes
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Old 09-30-04, 09:03 AM   #21
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sun you verse was dope i aready told you that but its up to what the people think here so there it is either way you still had a hard verse you should come to the council
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Old 09-30-04, 10:11 AM   #22
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Just peepin to see how its goin for my bet.
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Old 09-30-04, 10:15 AM   #23
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wat the fuck for real Empire is winning? he came with a midge line for God sake.
if i hadnt bet on this battle i would of given it to Souless hands down way more personal and had hitting punches.
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Old 09-30-04, 03:14 PM   #24
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souless..
kill the links, the bold, and the caps.
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Empire… Merk me!!…. Just like you said-that-you-can…
Cuz we know… if you don’t… you’ll just go reset your record-again!!!
Personal...a very good one
Stick to text… cuz ya audios… sure ain’t nothing to boast…*
Cuz I think ya voice couldn’t ‘cut it‘ if I slit ya throat!!!!
wordplay....lil played.
Ya skills are crap… you’re the only one screaming-tremendous…
You got played lines… you’re the reason geometric grids were invented!!
doesnt ryhme. not sure i get it.
Just be real don’t change ya record like you scared of defeat…
Take my edvice… ur best ‘key’… would be to ‘press delete!!!
heard this a billion times
Your poorly constructed… just like your avatar.. Why u try to be tight..
And your new crew must be stupid… your name ain’t even spelt right!!!!
pretty funny personal.
Stop ya text I’ve had enough of your shit… and so has your peers…
Honeslty… the last time you had A….W was drinking the root beer!!!
Lol...good wordplay. orignial.
Why u start unneeded beef… shit… reading ya text makes me mad…
Cuz ‘Claiming you’re the best’ was prolly the best punch you ever had!!!!!
very true personal.
overall nice verse. online didnt make sense. thats all.

Empire
No explaining.
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I hurt fakes like earthquakes ill leave ya verse at a tilt
Talk hard but ya bigshot bars is just midgets on stilts(1)
midgets on stilts are still big...
What you going through you was 0-2 reset ya record with strobe(2)
Couldnt spit fire with a lighther or hold cypher if you wrote on a globe(2)
how u can punch about a record change is beyond me...
You going down this all around K.O like L through N(3)
Like i blast steel at ya glass shield no chance to defend
I read the explanation. THATS NOT WORDPLAY
Leave un with broke hope cuz like i ghost wrote i lyrically own you
Rap shit only whacker spit would be if they spirtually cloned you
you and you....creative.
Damn fool like Ja-Rule only thing youmurder is INK so stop wowling
You so soft in ya crib beating off to the cover of ya N'SYNCE album
doesnt' ryhme to me.. soft anyways.
Lyrical exercise i strech guys this verbal areobics for whack rappers
Ya shit basically rated unground is ya elevation like backpackers
stretch...just like ur lines huh?...last line was played as hell
no good.....

wasn't really close.....
Soulless had a much better verse...
personal's....
punches......
wordplay.....

empire u had some as well...but the well....

THEY SUCKED.

my vote- soulless
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Old 09-30-04, 05:01 PM   #25
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He definetly won this... Alot better personals and alot more punches that hit... Empire came pretty good, though the more you need to explain the whacker the verse... Soulless definetly takes this shit... Nice opener and closer... The Press Delete punch wasnt that great... Neither was the "cuz i think ya voice couldnt cut it if i slit ya throat" line... Other than that some really great punches... Good spit from both...

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Old 09-30-04, 05:59 PM   #26
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lol too dudes i beef with everyday have thenerve to hate vote in my shit lol the punch obvious hate vote both yall is fucking faggots
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Old 09-30-04, 07:25 PM   #27
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Voted For: Soulless

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUULESSSSS....
i could tell that you have no soul tha way you mercilessly ripped this mark...
i like soul's better because it came a lot harder with better personals and better punchlines... and it was even better because i always knew what he was talkin about so it was much more enjoyable than empire ( no hate man)!!!
empire... you always got hella wordplay in yo raps but as you can see, majority of the people here vote for the one with the most entertaining verse and that one will almost always be the funniest or the one wit the best punches... so, you bein the one who's been here a lot longer than me, you prolly wont take my advice but... i suggest you work on your punches... maybe somewhere in the cypher or in yo crew... you should have some elevation threads... anyways, no hate man

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Old 09-30-04, 09:01 PM   #28
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Soulless: he had some nice lines, but his rhymes gets stretched towards the end, and the first couple of lines are hard to read because of the flow, there was too many pauses in your verse(the ... ) the last line made me laugh so that was sweet
Empire: you shouldn't explain your verses cause if your punches are good, you shouldn't need to explain it, your first couple of lines was stretched up and down but your structure was solid towards the end, you had some witty punches and nice vocab

Both had some nice lines but empire had the better you yall two......

vote empire
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Old 09-30-04, 09:44 PM   #29
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good battle..props to both
empire-good hard punches, a couple personals, nice flow and some good wordplay with that k.o l to n line that was tight..not the best i have seen from u but i think it was good enuff in this battle..dont come at me with that verse tho haha
soulless-u had some nice bars but ur punches didnt hit as hard as empires did, u did have personals and a little wordplay but ur flow was off a towards the end..this was a good verse but not good enuff against empire..no hate
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