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Old 10-02-04, 12:30 AM   #1
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S Dizzl Fo Shizzle The Rb Rv Clown

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WHAT THE FUCK IS THIS

Fuckin Screech's cousin becoming a rapper

You are to much son

And guess what

You goin down




: : Stop The Practice of Wackness : :
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S DIzzle says im wack and plain garbage
This is the first diss of many


You l
Dizzle When I spit at you, I choose to use action-words
In essence, I’m basically saying I attack the wack-with-verbs
Intelligent enough to keep intact-with-nerds infectious serge
Able to weed the wack out, I dispatch-the-herbs
Come and take a ride with me, I’ll be the driver and you all can be my passengers
This aint the special Rap olympics Dizzle so i doubt you will be a feirce challenger
Speak softly, told to speak up, but in fact-I’m-heard
U Had writer’s block ya whole life, me I never lacked-the-urge
I’m iller than you, hands-down so fagget put ya hands up
You suck so much, even your so-called fans-clown and thats whats up
Its time to bow-down to your superior
I’ve been put on this earth to make you feel inferior
I won’t just diss your outside, I’ll diss your intererior
Until your eyes start to swell with tears, “Please stop, I’m getting teary, Sir.”
I’ve been swell for years, You dealt-with-queers
Illness? (pause) its expected-here 17 huh nice breast 2 pair
If I decide to do audio’s I’ll be the best-you-hear
That won’t be for a while, I’m just allowing you to injest-the-fear
You should feel honored that I fucking blessed-this-here
I’m straight with this while you look like a suburban jack ass bitch
Don’t test me, dear S dizzle c-through like ya glass's witha Fat lip
I flow like a keg, I’m blessed-with-beer and a killers mind
You know its drastic, I’m so hot I melt plastic like ya ryhmes

My message to you:

Stop the Practice of Wackness.




Dizz son at least two good MCs left and one of them is “Frozen-like-the-Winter”
The other’s so Extreme, that even records by “Deion is Broken-like-this-Winter”~
But I come with torches and two by fours leavin Ya Smokin-Mics-with-Splinters
And eatin fakes for me is takin seriously cuz i'm not the Jokin-type-in-Dinners~
Ya Plain-just-Copy that’s why compared to me ya a joke from the fake jacob and jersey down to the shoes
I get “Extremely Heated” and Slice open ya Pancreas and watch ya Abdominal-Ooze~
Ice back for “Round 2” “Knockin you out just like Phenomenal-Booze”
Or just spit Cancerous rhymes that will swell and clog each one of ya Bronchial-Tubes~
Im fuckin sick of Fiend-Freaks im not the type who says “Let my Green-Speak”
Nope I got a Pristine-“Reach” with “Listerine”-Teeth that could “Clean-Bleach”~
But that’s As-a-Whole ya just an Ass-in-Whole, with brute force we Blast-a-Hole through ya fat head like a donut
Through ya Back-and-Soul and so exits ya Rap-so-Fold or meet mw -in a battle if ya ever feeling -Bold~and then WHAT


see me dizzle

you aint shit DAWG
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Old 10-02-04, 12:41 AM   #2
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man this is so true that mutha fuckin biotch wont battle me... i'm not that good... ha bitch that could be used as a personal... fucker nice work ice pick i think sum 1 needs to kill this fuckin idiot... to you sdizzle...BITCH...
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Old 10-02-04, 12:42 AM   #3
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oh and btw interesting sigg the girl fine as hell...lol
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Old 10-02-04, 12:52 AM   #4
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lool ice

Its Sdsizzle
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Old 10-02-04, 12:58 AM   #5
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lool ice

Its Sdsizzle



Yeah like i give a fuck
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Old 10-02-04, 06:13 PM   #6
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that was funny....i give it an 8......you should have made those last 3 lines like this and made it 4

Through ya Back-and-Soul and so exits ya Rap-so-Fold
But that’s As-a-Whole ya just an Ass-in-Whole
With brute force we Blast-a-Hole through ya fat head like a donut
So meet me in a battle if ya ever feeling Bad-and-Bold and then WHAT

that would be a lot better......you could have made this whole thing a lot better
but i give it an 8 in all

leave me some feedback in my open mics in my sig
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Old 10-02-04, 06:15 PM   #7
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And Ruff Tuff Thug or Al Capone.....whatever the fuck you are.......you suck.....i bet Dizzle would beat ya anyway.....he just don't wanna embarrass your ass......don't say shit like you can beat me cuz when you was Ruff Tuff Thug.....2 of ya losses were from me so don't say shit
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Old 10-02-04, 10:20 PM   #8
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hahaha.nice piece ... sick opener
multis were on point ... i didnt read it all tho ... too damn long
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Old 10-03-04, 03:00 AM   #9
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why even waste time on S-dipshyt?.lol
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Old 10-04-04, 11:16 PM   #10
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Old 10-04-04, 11:54 PM   #11
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fuckin hot man i liked that shit hit hard i didnt read all of it tho its real fuckin long man... nice tho good wordplay and stucture.
peep my poetry song when we meet links in the sig aight peace ~1~
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Old 10-07-04, 05:01 PM   #12
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Uppn for S DIZZLE
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