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Old 07-18-02, 02:31 PM   #1
ViSiOnZz
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What i'm about.....

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i'm a example of a tru emcee/
I spit heat so I burn tha mic 3rd degree/
I direct my spits in tha mic so call me "spike lee"/
1st 16 yr ol rapper an a vetran emcee/
verbally murdered emceez i built there graves an r.i.p/
homocide is all thats left for me/
to be murdered where i was born"in streetz"/
basicly im a geek tha way i spit knowlegde to my peepz/
half tha niggaz that think they hard are fake like greek god beliefz/
adreniline is hate in my body/
once it start'z it's 100% grade A beef/
I can't stop hatin fake niggaz until i turn ova a new leaf/
until then i'm gonna keep bustin bullets an runnin these streetz/
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Old 07-18-02, 03:51 PM   #2
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you got the multis locked down for the end of the bars and you had a couple of really tight lines around the middle of this piece.

maybe up the vocab some you'd be pretty tight.
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Old 07-18-02, 05:25 PM   #3
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thx uppin...
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Old 07-22-02, 02:14 PM   #4
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uppin....
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Old 07-22-02, 02:55 PM   #5
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uppin where feedback at??????????
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Old 07-23-02, 08:33 AM   #6
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dam uppin reply's dam...this lat uppin
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