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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Plutonium 2 28.57%
Spite 5 71.43%
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Old 10-16-04, 06:56 PM   #1
Spite
Flyweight
 
Plutonium vs Spite

IP: 1B3B C284

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Old 10-16-04, 06:57 PM   #2
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Plutonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 06:57 PM.
 
Old 10-16-04, 07:00 PM   #3
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Spite has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-04 07:00 PM.
 
Old 10-17-04, 12:48 PM   #4
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 1B3B C284

Lets see how far Pluto goes when I drop him in the tropics,
this a BATTLE? i’ll choke your raps blue so mc’s can COP it
aight...Let me start ripPIN you like important topics
Stop it and leave this Bold Fight now
they wont even read your verse, just Scroll Right down
The hard type? Yeah right You just type hard, fool your mine
because of weak rappers like you, ja rule got signed
My artillery will dance to the end while I watch biters drop
stab your arteries with a cancerous pen and give you writer’s block
Die on your life Breath and Sigh on the sight of spite being high as a kite
there’s a reason you type, cause like miss America winners, you cry on the mic
Your just the average hater on some drastic shit, who married a plastic bitch
was still glad he ate her, only boobies you see is on your calculator
hold up why lag this when the best drop and you cant even PRESS STOP
blast your chest off this phony is too lonely
so like 'music in empty bottles' you can blow me
Show me you Lost your hope after you dropped the soap that filled the shelve
now he’ll reenact Eddie in the movie, when Pluto kills himself
Since when do you flow freely Trust you cant see me,
kinda like the sig. flip you the BIRD cause I murdered this kiwi
 
Old 10-19-04, 03:32 AM   #5
Plutonium
Straight From Da Lab!
 
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From: New Zealand
IP: 205C 5614

I'm wack.......

said his word are weapons...hit me with a dictionary?
the kid coming up to hit me or is he playing pictionary?
not just one...my punch is phatter than 20 biggie's fist
you can "run wild" but "nature's call" still leave you "pissed"
you're wasting your time where you could be practising
can disguise as "pac's CV" but still be "Reported Missing"
who want to battle you with writtens...when you're "Spit e"n
kid wants a loss...he's forgetting dreams are fantasies
attacking in mist...even sprites can destroy your livers
you can rhyme doctor with hector...but still can't deliver
 
Old 10-19-04, 05:41 AM   #6
(X)eed
(X) CeEding all Expectations
 
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From: New Zealand
IP: 5A50 DAC7

Voted For: Spite

man wuz that shit awesome....
Show me you Lost your hope after you dropped the soap that filled the shelve
now he’ll reenact Eddie in the movie, when Pluto kills himself
Since when do you flow freely Trust you cant see me,
kinda like the sig. flip you the BIRD cause I murdered this kiwi
^^^that wuz THE MOST PHATTEST punchline ive seen damn, man spite u had sum awesome punches and i mean it but still cud improve, i voted 4 u only becuz of that,man but ur vocab needz wrk like;Die on your life Breath and Sigh on the sight of spite being high as a kite
^^^ that line is crap a 4/10 no offence but ur punchez r outta this wrld, return the favor
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Old 10-19-04, 11:10 AM   #7
Terse.
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From: Cali
IP: 31D6 6BD3

Voted For: Spite

aight,
Plutonium, ya verse was okay...but your punches were lackin, they didnt hit hard enough...u didnt have any personals or multies either...the only thing that stood out as bein good was the structure...keep elevatin...

Spite, def not a bad verse...u didnt seem to have personals either but u had multis n your punches were a lil mo creative...ya structure coulda used some work, but overall u had good consistency....

V/ Spite, fo mo overall creativity
 
Old 10-19-04, 06:58 PM   #8
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 1B3B C284

uppin for votes
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Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns
 
Old 10-19-04, 11:23 PM   #9
Mistic-Rogue
Lyrical Prosperity
 
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From: New Zealand
This was feedback posted for Plutonium

IP: F848 DAA7

lol, cheching polls..
 
Old 10-20-04, 01:57 AM   #10
Plutonium
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From: New Zealand
IP: 9834 0763

lol, uppin............................................
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Old 10-20-04, 06:34 PM   #11
Spite
Flyweight
 
IP: 0AC4 8555

uh uppin! lets get some votes, we'll return the favour god damnit. honest votes only.
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Old 10-20-04, 06:46 PM   #12
K.ontroverz.Y
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
 
From: Hamilton
IP: F127 D910

Voted For: Plutonium

you took this...this was a wack battle but plutonium merked u..lol his flow was way better and so was his structure it atleast was on Point.....LOL......dope shit fam......
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Old 10-20-04, 09:44 PM   #13
TitoBronsky
El Padrino
 
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From: Rotten Apple
IP: 0825 899A

Voted For: Plutonium

plutonium gets this with more consisten rhetoric... spite had a choppy delivery and set up... punches dragged... verse lacked substance... i like plutoniums set up, though some elevation is needed.. i thought this was a good battle none the less.

good luck to you both

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Old 10-20-04, 11:01 PM   #14
poison
Flyweight
 
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From: FUCK U
IP: 3D2F C45D

Voted For: Spite

thats some sick shit spite
nice double rhymes specially
nice flow, structure, punches and everything else
8.5/10

pluto i think u can even admit u lost this
ur rhymes were alright tho
6/10

my vote goes to spite
 
Old 10-20-04, 11:22 PM   #15
ghetto cripple
bringin' new thoughts to the name disability-flossed in tight wear shiny shoes you feelin' me
 
From: P-town
IP: AE85 B820

Voted For: Spite

yo first let me say i use to be on here a year or two ago and thought i was top shit until i got killed by a great lyricist now im back and better had to take time off but yea im back and this is the first battle since ive been back that was any good.

spite has obviously a better lyrical talent overall ryming "lonley with blow me" "shelve and himself" and is talent and thats what i know now and thats wat wins also killer hits liked the ja line and miss america line and the "pluto kills himself" line was good usage of what you know.

plut not so much vocab from you simple "dict...with pict...."
"liver and deliver" and against some like spit you lose, keep practicing.
goes to spit.
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