kon-kinda stretched.....multies made up for it though...i thought you had better punches and personals...structure needs some work......you had better multies and betta creativity.

notorious-like half of ya verseemed like filler....your punches were hittin soft....first bar was ya best punch...you really didnt come that hard

punches-kon
flow-kon
multies-kon
personals-kon
creativity-kon

basically kon edged it out in every category........v/kon

Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

pretty one sided battle for kontroversey........... u won b/c notorious is stupid as hell....... george washington cant tell a lie...... get ur facts right........ both had multies, so that was pretty tied up...... vocabulary goes to kontroversey by a long shot...... kon coulda won with juss the first 6 lines cuz the last four didnt really do much for the rest of ur battle...... nice personals and punches......... shit was pretty solid overall......

Notorious had sum aight shit but sum played punches and the messed up line with abe lincoln.......the structure was aight but thats not enought to beat kont..........

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U Thinkin U Defeatin And Completin Battles, But U Clearly Don Get Da Concept
U Defeation Me Is Uncommon Like "Crips" Walkin Through Da Blood Sets
weak opener...
Misconceptions, Deceptions, Deficits And Collections Of Lessons
Im Enhanced, So My Flow Make U Try Hard Like Gay People Flexin
barely a punch...
U Losin Dis Battle, And I Cant Tell A Lie Like Abe Lincoln
U Always Come Up Short And Tiny Like Premature And Deformed Children
best punch in ya verse an still weak...
Ive Seen U've Anialited Rooks B4, But Dawg Im A Different Version
U Gon Lose, And It Gon B Hard To Adjust Like SEX And Livin Virgins
self-glorified/no punch...

Notorious: Im not hatin on you dawg, I give honest feed and sometimes that means its gunna hurt ppl. First off, you gotta try staying away from self-glorifying yourself, your not here to freestyle, your in a battle...instead of making yourself look good with words, try making yourself look good by making your opponent look stupid <--best advice youll ever get right there. Also, I noticed you tried usin lots of multies in areas, which is a good thing, except in this case cause half of that shit didnt even make sence, you were just basically rhyming words together. If your gunna use multies, make sure they make sence when put together and also make sure the words arent super long or else it will throw off your flow and entire verse.

Notorious Verses overall verse = 4/10

Digestive System full of newbs, This kid's Vet Illiterate, Early Retirement I consider-it..
Career Status, Only Battles newbs, Never Even Looked at a vet, And he Admitted-it
alright opener...
Battlin Me? Dumb Decision, Wisemen? Please, Kid Makes more Mistakes then Blind mathamaticians..
Swingin punchlines Viciously, Punches Cause More Impact Then Head On Collisions
self-glorified/not feelin this line...
Spit Ill scripts, multiple Papercuts to the head, Cause Your brain to Disfunction..
I Spit that Godly Flow, Your Far From Great, Check The Sig,Angelz Of Deztruktion
not a punch...
This bitch is Bait For Vets, Your Whole Career You've Been Trapped on Fish-Hooks..
Punches Cause Flames, Try and tell Your mom That's the reason for your house to cook.. (burn Down)
weak but not bad...
Put this kid in a Mental Institution I think He's See'in Ghosts..
Thats the angelz callin', Oh yeah, God Told Me there's no place for you In heaven,
...................So When You Die Imma Laugh as You roast..
also not a punch/weak closer...

Kontroverzey: First off, I didnt like the fact that you made your text smaller, just keep it how it automatically comes out, larger font is easy to read and makes it look better. You used a lot of pointless lines and the others were self glorified. Tryt stayin away from those dawg, just like I said in Notoriouses feedback...but you actually did a small bit of research and creativity, that link in your verse was a good idea for a punch. Also you threw a few personals that hit him. watch your line lengths cause 2 of your bars were thrown right off cause they were too long. Especially that closer...wasnt feelin it, waaaaay too long dawg. shorten shit up and leave the font alone.

Kontroverzey overall verse = 5/10

Final Thought: This was an overall pretty weak battle but it was obvious that kontroverzey took it. he had harder personals, more creative ideas, and even a few funny lines. Notorious' verse had consistant vocab. Other than that his punches were weaker, no personals, didnt use the line maximum and multies were blown outta proportion cause they didnt have anything to do with his verse. Good job Kon, this was my hounest vote and im sure the final votes will also agree with my feedback/vote. Payce, and props to both, no hate.

i only spit weak on the weak.....the vets will have their chance of gettin merked lol

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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

..kontroverzey..:
k that was tight dawg nice punches hit hard man...but yes you had vocabulary haha that was rank fuck you pulled out a stone cold be time ass kicken haha on him haha...jk but ya that was dope...nice vocab and punches flowed nicly...stucture needed work but...

Notorious Verses:
not bad dawg but it coulda came harder dawg...you had nice stucture and it flowed but stucture needed work tho...maybe try adding more of complicated vocab in there i seen a little but thats easy shit try complicated shit no one should no make them look it up in the dictionary lol...

VOTE: ..kontroverzey..

uppin........one more vote and its ova fam............

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