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Old 10-19-04, 01:36 AM   #1
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PostmorteM: In The Attic...

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Dark beat, catchy hook good story if you can catch it for the most part...read the lyrics along if you want...


Verse 1 - Me
Verse 2 - Dank
Verse 3 - Rapidfire
Hook - Rapidfire

In The Attic...
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Old 10-19-04, 01:37 AM   #2
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I will edit links soon...don't close this..and if you reply to mine..I'll check yours...
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Old 10-19-04, 02:15 AM   #3
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Verse 1 - SmokaJoka
Flow is ok...lyrics are pretty nice, you sound out of breath for you whole verse tho....presence is ok

Verse 2 - Dank
Dank sounds the same as always..gets kinda boring after a while, but I know he won't change his delivery...lyrics are decent..dark...maybe could doo some more conplex rhyming

Verse 3 - Rapidfire
Ok...pretty average...flow seems iffy at times. lyrics are average, nothing great....delievry is pretty good

Hook - Rapidfire
Hook is meh..not really feelin it

Overall a decent track you 3...some parts could be improved...like lyrics and such...keep at it
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Coo...reply to this shit bitches....fuck
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I Wasn't Feeling The Beat....Kinda Sounded Like ICP A Little Bit...

Hmm....The Delivery and Shit Needs To Be Improved...

I Mean I Can't Hate Because Thats The Style Ya'll Like So Thats Straight....It Flowed and Sounded Decent...So Props To Your Production.

Just Keep Recording and Elevating.

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