Voted For: sabotage

challanged frown guy but this guy tried to sabotage me
then fakes comes along and trys to caution me
add ya both up and ya couldnt top me/
i didnt fuck with ya why would ya fuck with me
knowin in ya mind i could rap circles round ya waht ya nutz as me/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA LINES WERE STRETCH AND THA PUNCHES WERENT THAT GOOD MAYNE TOO PLAYED AND WASNT HITTING IT















































he dont got a profile up so people dont know ya lonley cause ya this close to beein exspose for phony we wont be down and well never be homie/
ya rhymes r outdated they choppy the was just chese gratedor ya dick like ya just masterbated/
ohh shit call the police his life just ran out on its lease
im like a pitbull of its leash trust me ya shouldnt of even tried to compete/
ill attack ya mind body n soul so next time ya act cocky
rember ya just got koed like my name was rocky/
^^^^^^^^^^^ YA VERSE WAS PLAYED AN DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTING IT AGAIN U NEED TO ELEVATE ON HARDER PUNCHES AND CREATIVE ONES TOO

IT WAS TOOOOOO BASIC














































ILLUSON-YA VERSE WAS PLAYED,DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES STANDING OUT,,,,,,,STRETCH LINES,,,,,,,,,,AND DIDNT HAD AN GOOD FLOW




"u" aint that "ill" "son", or so your record states
u dont key ur own verse, his techinquess copy and paste
^^^^^^^^^ A GOOD PUNCH NICE OPENER





































i'll slap illusion down then kick him and flex
im like an NBA ref the way i hit you with techs(teks)
^^^^^^^^^^6 ERM I DIDNT UNDERSTAND THAT LINE




































this is a cheap merking like clearance on retail
if i spit serious my lines would stick to your side like obese females
^^^^^^^^^^^ LINES STRETCH,,,,,,,,,BUT U MADE IT AN GOOD PUNCH











































even if u was on an escalator u wouldnt be on the rise
i'll throw you out the window so you wont have to sin when you lie
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCH LINES WERE A LIL STRETCH BUT U STILL MADE AN PUNCH OUT OF IT WAS AN "OK" PUNCH





































i jus lit him up and killed him so u can call it a hot crime
knockin Ms.Cleo out is the only way u can drop a hot-line*
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT THATS AN GOOD CLOSA NICE PUNCH



















































SABOTAGE-GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,LINES A LIL STRETCH IT RUIN DA FLOW A LIL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,DA PUNCHES WERE HITTING IT AND CONNECTED,,,,,,,,,,,,,













































OVERALL=I HAVE TO GO WITH SABOTAGE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES DA FLOW WAS A LIL MESSED UP BUT EITHER WAY HE HAD GOOD PUNCHES











































ILLUSON-YA VERSE WAS TOO BASIC,NEEDS VOCAB,,,,AND IT NEEDS CREATIVE PUNCHES AND PLUS SOME HARDER ONES TOO BUT KEEP IT UP ELEVATE HOMIE

~1
~PEACE~

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