Voted For: JaSa

vote jasa,
because banks shit was just so played....
and putting them links in there made u look like your struggling to find a punch none of them were good....
jasa wasnt that much better but still better.....




Fuck this whack head...Im spitting so furiously, im leaving him all slobbery,
Cause his bank of wins just got in a heist and im pulling off the robbery...
Murderin this fool, over 100 posts but im still droppin his rank,
But Lloyd wont lose his 'last name' when i demolish 'Banks'...
Banks is a whack kid and the fact remains he is slaving for a loss,
Cause the only time he is spitting 'sick' is when he forgets to 'floss'!...
He's an unknown bank, that not one female would want to 'deposit in',
Cause his "deposit slip" came up short like Dan Davito did in 'Twins'!...

5.5/10


i'm caving in his self pride and toppling his bars with not an ounce of remorse
attempting to beat me is like cancer patients using cigars as a health resource
set the drop time for 2 hours after the check in, must have a slow mind process
jasa showing skills is like paralysis victims winning 100 meter relay contests
u sent me 2 private messages, at first i thought u was playing, u wanna loss
i ain't even gotta attempt to win, i could beat u with my computer turned off
u could attach a julius erving jersey to ya rhymes and they wouldn't be classic
a vote, stevie wonder has a better chance of making in through rush hour traffic

5/10

return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157072

^^ thanks for the vote..... uppin for some more honest votes

uppin for honest explained votes people

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Voted For: JaSa

open: banks....the punch he used was more effective than the on jasa used...i lyked jasa's concept, tho
close: banks...pretty much the same reason as the last...but, jasa shoulda quit with tha "bank" concept...it woulda been better if he had've played off jus parts of banks name...
flow: banks....jasa's was a lil off...even tho banks lines were long, they stayed that way the whole verse.
werdplay: jasa...obvious reasons...
metas: banks...jasa just had a lot of werdplays..
punches: banks...6th line got that one...
favorite line: jasa's 4th one...that was n.y.c.e

vote: banks.....he took more catagories

*this was a good battle...i'd lyke to advise jasa to focus on the less obvious name plays...be more creative

Vote Switched

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I wanted the vote to go to Banks....I didnt know that you had to put the vote in tha box under the person you wanted give the vote to

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^^ get a mod to fix it or something? :S..........

Voted For: Banks

banks took this one but it was close they both had nnice rhymes flow structre meatas but banks hit a lil harder with his punches with better word play

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