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Old 10-26-04, 12:43 AM   #1
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oreo's qiuk freestyle

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im trying to be the best in the game by far/
the rest of yall can kiss your chances goodbye(MUAH)/
i shine bright, deserve to be in the sky im a star/
fresh hooks stay coming out my mouth like a gar/
take your shots to me it's just metal in the air/
you caint compare, it;s the truth so dont dare/
kings always comes out on top like game of solitare/
when i spit call me a youngblood cuz all you hear is Damn/
and the beef in the hood, i can that shit like it was spam/
a killa like cam, i can even eat rappers ghost like pac-man/
no cops catch me im sorta like the hood ginger-bread man/
hoes know i keep that white fluid shootn out like spiderman/
when i step up to a microphone they all know its a montrosity/
hate all you want,even behind me they front,i feed off animostity/
speed to fame and glory,caint slo down i gotta reach the top veloctiy/
couldnt even reach boardwalk before me at home by playin monopoly/
im a tragic lto the game like the two plane highjakers of 9/11/
i wont die soon,aint my time ill hide under the stairway to heaven/
you all got blood in your body, my veins carry petroilium/
in my hood when cats step up they the same hieght as nepolian/

quikfreestyle rop some thoughts
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Old 10-26-04, 02:07 PM   #2
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upin...get at it
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Old 10-26-04, 02:35 PM   #3
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dat was a good freestyle.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 10-26-04, 02:36 PM   #4
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u got mad talent..i mean yea ive seen better n all but otha than dat its good.....nice vocab..u can work on the structure a lil but otha than dat...good piece...9/10..keep it up
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Old 10-27-04, 12:00 AM   #5
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thanks yall uppin some more feedback
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Old 10-27-04, 01:09 PM   #6
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upin..............................
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Old 10-27-04, 02:15 PM   #7
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some feed yall..............
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Old 10-27-04, 11:52 PM   #8
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feed on it.............................
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Old 10-27-04, 11:59 PM   #9
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I liked except for that / stuff at the end of the lines but good overall
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Old 10-28-04, 12:01 AM   #10
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thanks i do that its a habit to end my bar that way
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Old 10-28-04, 02:55 PM   #11
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feed back ill do the same
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Old 10-28-04, 03:08 PM   #12
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''my penis is the size of a peanut...have u seen it?...fuck naaaw you aint seen it!..its the size of a peanut..''

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Old 10-28-04, 03:11 PM   #13
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^^^^ wat the fuck lol thats giong in my sig lol
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Old 10-28-04, 03:15 PM   #14
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lmaoooo!!
u freeposted on my dope man OM, so i returned the favor
pretty tight freestyle by the way

peep my shit that i'm gonna post in the OM in about 5 minutes lol
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Old 10-28-04, 03:20 PM   #15
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aight then dopey
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