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just felt like freestyling befor I go to work...
IP: EFEB C28B
yea yea its ya boy I.E REPP'IN D2R YA HERD....
yo i cop O'Z the size of a commet hole... ya flow is commical, punches known like a common cold... hook un-phanominal, so "watch" my bullets... cuz "see its time to go"... bet ya never knew ya chest could-fold... dog, i be in a almond whipe intierrior same colors as my nuts... wow... crack'in ya face same way i do my dutch... rep D2R like P.R, till doctors come performing C.P.R ... got the blind list'in saying.... i can see he's hard... front'in on R.V while ya trying to figue out our faces... the same way cops try to figuer out our cases... the way i throw these whack emcees down on they knees... im spittin so sick "atchu" when i "sneeze"... the text i flee, elevation higher than trees... while mah biological form of glucose subtractin sugar off these mis-placed G'z.. i tranfer info the way i send puters to come(com)... punches leaving all ya'll bodies numb.. dun act dumb... cuz add up lyrics until i "sum"... and make you swallow a pack of mah spits ten times the size of "tums" get outta tha game cuzz when i reign i make ya'll katz insane... cuttin blood circulations from ya veins... then go on the fast-lane... but remember i aint here for fun im straight i leave emcees in pain next on tha charts to me is way lower than average formation... i set implications... while i play stations... im on tha top "ratin"... so stop hatin... cuzz ur opposite of mah acts... it aint worth retaining so stop realatin.... ur outta order like "lost-line"... pull out nines and make da heat fracture your shrines.... re-order ya spine... fuck a clock... while i stick knifes in ya time... and punches squeeze da red outta u like "heinz".... too slick with my order of spits... tallying them on ticks, while snatchin strawz from hicks... with one click "BAMM" i blow out ya hips..... and make so many "hits" on ya "lips" makin u talk over ya toungue like u had a fuckin "lisp"... *ha* nigga under my pention while im extending ya katz offendin... im redemless im enhacin so temendous.. get off da dick bitch... o ya i forgot to mention im beating you bitches like my "Shaw-Shank" extend-this... my flow bustin all yo wit mah tops of a fouty-fo... smoke ya like dro, stop open the steal-toe... and i lyrically grow... like a dick stickin up a bitch azz .... man SUCK MY DICK YO... ![]() ![]() I TOLD YA MOTHER FUCKERS IM BACK AT IT AGAIN...... D2R YA HERD..... |
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IP: 6CEA 0327
good flow,good punches,good vocab.good shit,keep em comin'.
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IP: EFEB C28B
good look'in upp'in.....
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IP: EFEB C28B
upp'in dont sleep.....................................
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IP: 258C A279
shit was pretty decent hea mayn...
a nice flow to it..creative n' shit... 7.9/10
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IP: 5043 32F4
Decent, looked like you had to forse a couple of those lines out. You're style is similar to Em's but he has more versatility & some better lines & structure
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IP: EFEB C28B
thanks for the feedback ya......
upp'in for more feed back....... |
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IP: EFEB C28B
thanks for the feedback ya......
upp'in for more feed back....... |
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IP: 46C3 56BC
thanks for the feedback ya......
upp'in for more feed back....... |
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IP: B417 DEF0
upp'in for feed back..........
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the medicine man
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IP: 888C 2BD4
i like ya hit em up better but hot drop..we should collab so name a topic and holla..
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IP: EBA1 3112
upp'in............................................ .......
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IP: DADF F7AE
up up and away she blows
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IP: FC89 54C5
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open mic rules: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141490 leave ya link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 u have 24 hours to post a link with proper feed back if u dont understand what is a proper feed back click on these links above they should help those who really dont understand and for those who is playin dumb u'r one step to being BANND from open mic... |
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