RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > Fresh From The Lab > Textual Releases
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 10-29-04, 08:36 AM   #1
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
just felt like freestyling befor I go to work...

IP: EFEB C28B

yea yea its ya boy I.E REPP'IN D2R YA HERD....

yo i cop O'Z the size of a commet hole...
ya flow is commical, punches known like a common cold...
hook un-phanominal, so "watch" my bullets... cuz "see its time to go"...
bet ya never knew ya chest could-fold...
dog, i be in a almond whipe intierrior same colors as my nuts... wow...
crack'in ya face same way i do my dutch...
rep D2R like P.R, till doctors come performing C.P.R ...
got the blind list'in saying.... i can see he's hard...
front'in on R.V while ya trying to figue out our faces...
the same way cops try to figuer out our cases...
the way i throw these whack emcees down on they knees...
im spittin so sick "atchu" when i "sneeze"...
the text i flee, elevation higher than trees...
while mah biological form of glucose subtractin sugar off these mis-placed G'z..
i tranfer info the way i send puters to come(com)...
punches leaving all ya'll bodies numb.. dun act dumb...
cuz add up lyrics until i "sum"...
and make you swallow a pack of mah spits ten times the size of "tums"
get outta tha game cuzz when i reign i make ya'll katz insane...
cuttin blood circulations from ya veins...
then go on the fast-lane... but remember i aint here for fun im straight i leave emcees in pain
next on tha charts to me is way lower than average formation...
i set implications... while i play stations...
im on tha top "ratin"... so stop hatin... cuzz ur opposite of mah acts...
it aint worth retaining so stop realatin....
ur outta order like "lost-line"... pull out nines and make da heat fracture your shrines....
re-order ya spine... fuck a clock... while i stick knifes in ya time... and punches squeeze da red outta u like "heinz"....
too slick with my order of spits... tallying them on ticks, while snatchin strawz from hicks...
with one click "BAMM" i blow out ya hips.....
and make so many "hits" on ya "lips" makin u talk over ya toungue like u had a fuckin "lisp"... *ha*
nigga under my pention while im extending ya katz offendin...
im redemless im enhacin so temendous..
get off da dick bitch... o ya i forgot to mention im beating you bitches like my "Shaw-Shank" extend-this...
my flow bustin all yo wit mah tops of a fouty-fo... smoke ya like dro, stop open the steal-toe... and i lyrically grow...
like a dick stickin up a bitch azz .... man SUCK MY DICK YO...

BANG-BANG-EARLY

I TOLD YA MOTHER FUCKERS IM BACK AT IT AGAIN......

D2R YA HERD.....
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-04, 01:36 PM   #2
Loveliss Grandz
***cITYSLICka***
 
Loveliss Grandz's Avatar
 
Posts: 521
Joined: Oct 2004
From: BrOOklyN,N.Y.
Status: Offline
Text Record: 1-2
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 6CEA 0327

good flow,good punches,good vocab.good shit,keep em comin'.
__________________



I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-29-04, 07:43 PM   #3
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: EFEB C28B

good look'in upp'in.....
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-04, 09:35 AM   #4
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: EFEB C28B

upp'in dont sleep.....................................
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-04, 11:58 AM   #5
Sik Wit It
 
Posts: 5,817
Joined: May 2004
From: Florida
Status: Offline
IP: 258C A279

shit was pretty decent hea mayn...
a nice flow to it..creative n' shit...

7.9/10
__________________
..The Council..
7 Day Theory
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-04, 01:00 PM   #6
Chew187
Flyweight
 
Chew187's Avatar
 
Posts: 115
Joined: Oct 2004
From: Canada "king of countries"
Status: Offline
Text Record: 0-0
Audio Record: 0-1
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 5043 32F4

Decent, looked like you had to forse a couple of those lines out. You're style is similar to Em's but he has more versatility & some better lines & structure
But how can you compare youself to Eminem?!? N-E wayz nice drop I wouldn't say it was much better than average but it looks like you typed it in a hurry so.. Keep dropping; there were a few lines I thought were great Even on the ones that werent so great still had good flow to it 8/10 PROPS
  Reply With Quote
Old 10-30-04, 10:18 PM   #7
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: EFEB C28B

thanks for the feedback ya......

upp'in for more feed back.......
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-01-04, 08:26 AM   #8
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: EFEB C28B

thanks for the feedback ya......

upp'in for more feed back.......
  Reply With Quote
Old 11-08-04, 11:29 AM   #9
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: 46C3 56BC

thanks for the feedback ya......

upp'in for more feed back.......
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-04-04, 09:26 AM   #10
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: B417 DEF0

upp'in for feed back..........
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-04-04, 09:33 AM   #11
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
Posts: 7,487
Joined: Jul 2004
From: East Coast
Status: Offline
Text Record: 43-6
Audio Record: 0-0
Graphics Record: 0-0
IP: 888C 2BD4

i like ya hit em up better but hot drop..we should collab so name a topic and holla..
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-20-04, 11:33 AM   #12
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: EBA1 3112

upp'in............................................ .......
  Reply With Quote
Old 12-23-04, 10:01 AM   #13
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: DADF F7AE

up up and away she blows
  Reply With Quote
Old 01-29-05, 09:15 AM   #14
intensify effect
Banned
 
intensify effect's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,626
Joined: Jul 2004
Status: Offline
IP: FC89 54C5

************************************************** ********************************
open mic rules:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141490
leave ya link:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166

u have 24 hours to post a link with proper feed back if u dont understand what is a proper feed back click on these links above they should help those who really dont understand and for those who is playin dumb u'r one step to being BANND from open mic...
  Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 11:30 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.