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10-30-04, 06:22 PM
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New Saaran Joint...BACK TO DA FUTURE
IP: 758A C811
yo dis da ish saaran and pp2
BACK TO DA FUTURE first verse: pp2 chorus saaran second verse saaran chorus saaran third vese pp2 peep and leave feed www.soundclick.com/saaran
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10-30-04, 10:07 PM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: F127 D910
muda fucka you took my beat i just did a verse for this beat LOL anywayz
ur flow wasnt that good ur lyricz was hard to hear becuz of ur voice but ur quality was pretty dope...this shit was aiight...just neet to pure more emotional on dis
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10-31-04, 12:03 PM
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New to RV
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IP: CEC2 D817
Yea, just about all you have is good quality..
Multi's sound like they have potential but I can't make out what ya saying.. Your delivery and presence isn't good at all...I think that's the area you need to work on... And you have no emotion... Basically, work on it, because hard work equals success. Keep doing you !. |
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10-31-04, 05:03 PM
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IP: 4ED6 D0C7
i wasnt feeling it......it seemed like u were just reading ur verse to ur self.....no emotion.......nice quality......and the hook u should of played with it more......lyrics was cool.....stay up
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10-31-04, 05:05 PM
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IP: 3E71 1555
i was the middle guy i dont see you sayin you cant here my lyrics ... i dont know thought but thanx for da criticism... yo ECKO audio battle me
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10-31-04, 05:10 PM
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Addicted
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IP: 4ED6 D0C7
set it up bruh.....
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11-18-04, 10:28 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 75E4 9AE4
The Chorus was ok but the verses were a lil off.....quatlity was Iight too...well keep it up i need to hear more pzz ~1~
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11-21-04, 03:30 AM
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5/27/83 A CHAMP WAS BORN
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IP: F751 2D88
track was aight man your flow and delivery were aight emotion could have been upped a bit beat is nice lyrics were str8 quality was clean over-all pretty decent track man keep doing ya ish -1NE-
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12-02-04, 11:37 PM
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10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
uppin cuz this my only song and would like more critism. im first, saraan secound and he's the chorus then i finish it up.
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