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11-01-04, 02:30 PM
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Still Spectacular, Yes!
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My First Poem Eva
The Basic Beat Of Hearts Unseen And Corruptive Noise Of Ghosts Between Have Seeped Your Soul From Other Interests And The Pain Shall Kill For Another Mistress
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Jus Incredible Lyrics -What God Has For Me..Is Meant For Me. II COR. 12:9
And He Said To Me, "My Grace Is Sufficient For You, For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness." Therefore, I Will Rather Most Gladly Boast In My Infirmities, So That The Power Of God May Rest Upon Me. |
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11-01-04, 05:32 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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nice,short but said a lot, good for a first poem,would have been better if it was longer, but overall not bad..keep workin on it,,,,1
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11-01-04, 08:39 PM
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Still Spectacular, Yes!
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IP: 0141 4C3B
^appreciate da feedback
tanks... yeah
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Jus Incredible Lyrics -What God Has For Me..Is Meant For Me. II COR. 12:9
And He Said To Me, "My Grace Is Sufficient For You, For My Strength Is Made Perfect In Weakness." Therefore, I Will Rather Most Gladly Boast In My Infirmities, So That The Power Of God May Rest Upon Me. |
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