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Old 07-25-02, 07:24 AM   #1
Forrest Gump
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DeJure the Raw vs. Devine Visionary

IP: B760 6321

Listen all we need are VOTES

This site sleeps to much this battle has been up since Monday.


Devine Visionary:


F.Y.I's:More holes in cheezy emcees.....Swiss cheese

well then here we go
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let ya know off jump, i put so many
holes in cheezy emcees, i got Kraft holdin grudges//
My metaphoric presentation of punches cease life lines, yours feel more like shoulder nudges//
broken mentals leavin thins nigga w/ brain crutches, wordplay displayed in such an uncanny fashion, dawg i Punch more than Hawaiian//
you claim to be
The King of this Lyriced Jungle, c'mon dawg fibs are 4 kids everyone knows you lion (lyin)//
Just stop tyrin ya whole style is irrelevant, if you
fought the cashier at the box office will be the only way you get a fare(fair) fight//
You scared right, predict nightmares for this sprockett, best cuddle up w/ moms tonite//
I will
ignite flames under ya ass, just to see you drop hot shit//
played line but you still can't fucks w/ mine, i'm driving catz back w/ ease, you still earning ya learners permit//


need a breath............okay back to work


My worse verse leaves closed caskets at funerals, fathers heart filled with hatred off the words i stated//
underated but elevated, created ways to keep mines sedated and freeze bodies froms souls vacated//
My skillz are heavyweighted, this niggas like garbage on the trash day, it's time you've been put on the curb//
i beat this herb with murderous nouns & killer verbs, acknowledge the obvious, to you i am superb//


here it is dawg you got until 4:45 est to post or it's a DQ






Dejure the Raw's verse:


Devine you wack,well ya verse was hardly-a-rap//I'ma say tha same thing ya girl said," man you have to cum-harder-than-that/ What R U doin"//suprised if anyone read your verse and sat-threw-it// I'd play off your verse, but thats tha only way i'd probably-lose-it//

you wont blow even if wind hit your cremation//forget radio,stick to sony, thats tha only way you'll ever play-station//.....yeh my words harsh,I'm not-kind// your name sounds like a T.V sychic, now tha only thing you missen is tha hot-lines//I'm not-lyin//

think you tha sh*t cuz bought you a dell// well I'ma flip tha commercial,heres my version,"Dude,your gettin an L"//

you think people care that your verse-redder?//or that you must flow-better,, just because of tha use of your bold-letters//.......your a herb, and you know its true//you could take steroids,virgen, i'll still get more cut than you......
 
Old 07-25-02, 07:25 AM   #2
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Quote:
Originally posted by LilDallas
Devine I seen you come harder, I ain't hatin. Your vocab was good but the betta' punches came from Dejure. I gotta give it to him cuz he did come harder, but I ain't hatin on your shit it was still straight.

vote=dejure
 
Old 07-25-02, 07:26 AM   #3
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Originally posted by rar one
Eh, this was a decent battle over all..

Frankly Devine Visionary came out stronger with his Punchs, and metaphors over all.... His rhyme scheme was ok coulda been better by making the bars a lil shorter but still a nice verse.. Id rate it like a 7/8 for one...

Dejure - Not bad of a verse.. Some of your lines had me laughing, They really werent that hard tho.. Your first set of bars were kinda funny, but kinda weak at the same time.. Over all like a 6/7 for a verse...

Metaphors= DV
Punchs= DV
Mulits= DV
Rhyme Scheme=DV
Vocab= DV

vote= Devine Visionary came out way better.. Had pretty much all tha aspects done were as Dejure didnt.. He lackd on to many things..

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Old 07-25-02, 07:26 AM   #4
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Quote:
Originally posted by C.F.C
Quote:I will ignite flames under ya ass, just to see you drop hot shit

Hot shit, killa. vote=Devine Visionary
"C"2Versatile
 
Old 07-25-02, 07:28 AM   #5
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Quote:
Originally posted by sK!LLz
damn nigga stop beastin

its skilllz to the rescue lmao(no homo) ha


umm ok here we go


yah both had ok verses but devine beat his opponent in almost every way not by that much but it was enough to win na mean


devine nice punches and flow

dejure your was nice but you should of spit a lil more and betta punches na mean

100

my vote goes to devine

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Old 07-25-02, 07:28 AM   #6
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the count is 3-1 my way.
 
Old 07-25-02, 11:23 AM   #7
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Vote=Devine Visionary

Flow-Devine Visionary
Punches-Devine Visionary
Multis/inners-Dejour
wordplay-Devine Visionary
Overall-Devine Visionary
 
Old 07-25-02, 11:55 AM   #8
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Off~Center i love you man.It is taking so long to get votes thanx.


4-1
 
Old 07-29-02, 08:02 AM   #9
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uppin for the longest battle i've ever had.
 
Old 07-29-02, 11:24 AM   #10
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NICE BATTLE....FEELIN BOTH EMCEES.....BOTH OF YALL CAME HARD BUT DEVINE GOT THIS BATTLE....HE JUST HAD HARDER PUNCHES,DOPE METAS AND A GOOD FLOW....DONT GET ME WRONG DEJURE WAS NICE TO..HAD NICE MULTIS AND YA HAD SOME GOOD LINES TOO BUT I THINK DEVINE....JUST EDGED THIS ONE OUT...


VOTE=DEVINE..
 
 


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