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Need critic on my newest joint, suacide
IP: 601A A57B
i started a thred in culture talking about hapyness and shid, that all led me to do this joint. Its a litle shakey so please give feedback
Song is "Suacide" and peepit on www.mp3.com/Ibro tx, stay smoken |
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
Yo I liked that, it had that premo-esque sound to it, while not biting his style - it's one of those beats that just begs for a cat to spit something with meaning over it, something deep, nice one. Only prob was, you could hardly hear the lyrics over the music, so I suggest altering that in the EQ or mixer....but apart from that, v. ill!
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IP: 06FB 41CB
tx for the heads up dog,
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IP: 06FB 41CB
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IP: D06E 4720
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IP: 0BD1 0BD0
yeah, the beat was hot, deep and flow, with an emotional tip to it. the kind that makes u sit back and think. nice one.
Peace, Slim that 509 lyricist track was ill. beat was hot, and flow from the emcee was tight too. nice track. |
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IP: 4B85 9B02
i love that shit Ibro...looking forward to hearing ya in tha tournament... i think that the music was a lil too loud, cuz i could hear you clear and all but the piano keyz noise was making it hard to keep a lock on ya voice. stay cool - elevate!
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IP: D06E 4720
tx for all the responses fellas, oh yeah the 509 Lyricist that was an ill joint, the flow with rz was almoust perfect. Yeah i definately need to adjust the tone.
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