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11-04-04, 09:57 PM | #1 | |||||||
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how i do
IP: 3AE8 B82C
i dont care wat people say cause im confident,
and i dont care wat they think,cause to me it's a compliment, im tired of people rappin when they flow is symplistic, tryin to act tight when they low as LIMP BIZKIT, they mad cause i got four "15's" in da bac of da trunk , hatin cause every where i go u can feel da bump, they juss no it's so nice,and now they gotta have dis, eye's so blinded they dont think bout da savage, every where i go they do wat i want,and the gurls promise me, they all treat me wit respect like a prophecy, u no all my gurl they all real nice and none of them is grody, but u should see da sh!t dat da gurls show me, cause u no im on da stage as i spit dis verse, u doin kinda good but ya skill is worse, dis is ya boy JJ straight from stl..lol..dats how i do |
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11-04-04, 10:02 PM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 5043 32F4
need elevation bad stucture keep it up tho..
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11-04-04, 10:19 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 3AE8 B82C
ey y'all give me some feed bac
dat was my first post tell me wat y'all think bout it
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11-04-04, 10:22 PM | #4 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
hmm...it was decent for a first-ever-rap on this site...but dawg we from STL...YOU GOTTA REP IT BETTA THAN THAT DAWG!!! Come on homie!! Keep it up dawg...you'll get there soon homeboy...holla...1
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11-04-04, 10:24 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 3AE8 B82C
yo man i no i got betta i was juss spittin for my first one
but thanx for da advice homie.holla
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11-04-04, 10:58 PM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: C36C 56E2
The piece wasn't all that elevated but it was decent. Could've come a lot more creative, used multies to crisp the flow, and used a bit more vocab. Peace stay movin!
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11-06-04, 08:20 PM | #7 | |||||||
you gotta hear me again
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IP: 8983 E628
great new comer shit but bad as a pro shit
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12-06-04, 04:55 PM | #8 | |||||
Ill Emcee
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IP: C665 8FBD
Wasnt that bad... I guess...... Good Verse tho...
Peace out~
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12-06-04, 05:42 PM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: C295 A011
ya vocab needs to elevate i give u a 4/10 fix ya structure too
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