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ThugLife 1 16.67%
...Xclusive... 5 83.33%
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Old 11-04-04, 10:48 PM   #16
Willa
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ok u had better structure even though ur personals were corny u had some and thats y i think u won lol
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Old 11-05-04, 08:12 AM   #17
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this was a weak verse...
sauage N bandage DONT RHYME.....

weak verse...

thug life u'r was weak as-well....

thats why i aint voting....
 
Old 11-05-04, 07:59 PM   #18
DrasticMeasureZ
mess with me get cooked
 
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bitch I take 3 min to load my gat/
and a couple more to make a track/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH HOMIE

your like 10 u aint even got hair round yo nut sack/
just a faggot is wat u are/
when u came out tha closet u came out way to far/
runnin all over u for days/
only person u can have wins over are gays/
dog this shit will hurt if I swallow but what if I choked/
my neighbors callin the poilice on me cuz of tha faggot I smoked/1
man heres another win/
so thats another sin/
this is str8 from my brain/
im only half way insane/
u have an issue/
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD PUNCH NOT AN GOOD FLOW
get a tissue/
and leave this site no one will miss u/

^^^^^^^^^^^ POOR CLOSA NOT AN GOOD VERSE HERE


THUGLIFE-OK NOT AN GOOD VERSE,, U DIDNT HAD NO GOOD PUNCHES PLUS NO FLOW BAD VERSE HERE






Who do you “think” you are 2pac yelling out ThugLife…
I “guess” you think you’re gonna stab me with a knife…
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW "OK" PUNCH



Naw, you couldn’t hurt a “fat” man and his stick of sausage…
After…...I beat your “thin” ass you gonna need a bandage…
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ PUNCH GOOD FLOW


You wish you were dope enough to “drop” it like its hot…
Like the song by Snoop ft. Pharrell You’ll “fall” on the spot…
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM OK CLOSA GOOD PUNCH



X-HAD AN GOOD VERSE NICE PUNCHES AND GOOD FLOW



OVERALL- X GOT DIS HANDS DOWN HE HAD PUNCHES AND FLOW CREATIVE PUNCHES

THUGLIFE-U DIDNT HAD AN GOOD VERSE NO FLOW NO GOOD DECENT PUNCHES ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND FLOW AIGHT



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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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