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Old 07-28-02, 12:26 AM   #1
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part 2 to absent let me know what you think

Guiding your hands so gracefully along my face we lay in the depths of our love/
Temptation screaming our names/
Giving in we share loves sweet kiss/
The taste of two souls combined producing one lingering amongst our tongues/
Our eyes gazing and grazing upon each detail that we memorize in great delight/
Hormones in the process of taking twilight’s flight/
Minds full of fantasy, bodies full of fact/
I hit the exact spot that flushes your body with a feeling of x-da-see I pull you daringly close to me we love so tenderly/
Never letting go our hearts abundant speeches moving with the flow we find ourselves addicted//

aye pleez tell da truth but don't dawg me
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Old 07-28-02, 12:33 AM   #2
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well... it was a good drop... with a very good choice of words... the flows a little off... but it was a deep, good drop i was digging it.. very sweet awww ~peace
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Old 07-28-02, 12:38 AM   #3
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thank you foe keepin it real i respect that
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Old 07-28-02, 08:44 AM   #4
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emotions were more than well felt my fellow poet/
i felt it could have flowed better/
but who am i to judge how u feel/
keep preaching truth/
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