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Old 11-21-04, 05:24 PM   #1
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aight yall, before i got a lot of people tellin me to put more emotion and shit in so i did. here it is, the RERECORDED PHILOSIPHER DISS. hope you like this one better....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/wickedclownmusic.htm
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Old 11-21-04, 05:32 PM   #2
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work on flow and emotion........but mainly flow
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Old 11-21-04, 05:36 PM   #3
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did u even listen to the nrw one newmethod?
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Old 11-21-04, 05:46 PM   #4
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nice wicked....atleas we can hear the lyrics...if you wanna collab once PM me...and why dont you have the Da Rip officiel Sig in your signature
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Old 11-21-04, 05:56 PM   #5
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merked ?... dont say that ever a again.. u sounded so fake LOL... wow..


ok.. now..

flow was horrible.. and ya lyrics were pretty simple.. for a first drop im takin it.. quality was good, except when u clipped.. work on your flow and matching the snares... word.. just keep droppin an tryna elevate.. you'll get there..
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Old 11-21-04, 06:02 PM   #6
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im jsut tryin to give constructive criticism........just like calam.......
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Old 11-22-04, 10:51 AM   #7
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Quality is dope is quite clear...vocally u could up the emotion and flow could be improved...some punches were aight a lotta fucks in there lol...so lyrics could be upped but yea for a 1st drop this was a good attempt jus keep them comin and u'll elevate naturally
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Old 11-22-04, 08:43 PM   #8
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not feeling this at all man i could swear i gave feedback on this already work on ya flow and delivery it sounds like your talking over the beat keep elevating is all i got to say -peace-
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yeh jus emotion and flow needs work thats it..
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