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11-23-04, 04:49 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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Paradise Gone!
IP: 4185 68F3
[My Paradise] It wasn't another ritual, misrable day... Writting my original, lyrical verse in my spiritual place.. This land had trees from the tallest to shortest.. Empty of tourist, Im alone in my own paradise forest... It's nice n private, it's quiet, more silent then slienced... A unknown creator behind it, Gods Heaven Defines it... This creation is what gives me my great inspirations... Empty of hate temptations, soul warmed by the insilation.. Had no preperations to have my eyes full of amazment... There is no replacement for the paradise im placed in... [Why I Will Never Leave] This is where I made my family, who show'd love back at me... When I would sadely go through tough struggles tragiclly... This is where i met my fiancee, my love, my true destiny... The person thats ment for me who'll always love me endlessly... This is my home, full of good and bad memories... And i'll never ever leave untill i reach the end of me... [A dream] It wasn't a regular nite, because of this terrible dream... Full of unforgetable, dreadfull things i wish i never seen.. What I dreamed felt like a vision, like a short premanition... Cuz I saw myself leavin paradise and wasn't my decision... Reasons Missin, woke up wit body temp. over 100 degrees... As if i jst survived a volcanic debree thats jst been released.... [Ashes] I open my eyes wider, realized im in the middle of a wild fire... Can't think, my eyes tired, see a tree so decide to climb higher.. I jump down the other side, right before the tree quickly clashes.. I ain't the only one scared,cuz as i run, an animal quickly passes.. Why did this have to happen, I really don't understand it... As I still panic, more trees to the ground loudly smashes... As i stand from far, memories in paradise slowly turns to ashes.. As I stand from far, I say to my self, "It was nice while it lasted"...
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11-23-04, 04:54 PM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 4185 68F3
haha, hey thats me!!
 , damn im dope!! 
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11-23-04, 08:55 PM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 4185 68F3
damn, someone freaken give me feedback
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11-23-04, 10:35 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
dope shit keepum dopen homie
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11-23-04, 11:58 PM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 4185 68F3
uppin................
thanx for feedback
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11-23-04, 11:59 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
forgot to say...you stole my last name for your topical
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11-24-04, 12:07 AM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 4185 68F3
i did??how?????
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11-24-04, 12:11 AM
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L.E
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IP: 826C 4C70
Very nice piece...keep up the hot shit, you got everything goin for ya...hit up the links in my sig...peace.
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11-24-04, 12:43 AM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: 4185 68F3
thanx, haven't seen u in a while, where have u been?
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11-29-04, 08:36 PM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: B752 4332
up up and away.
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