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11-24-04, 08:11 AM
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IP: 9227 0965
uppin this joint prolly for the last time today... gotta go to work soon... holla at ya boy
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11-24-04, 02:48 PM
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IP: 9DD1 2DB9
i lied... uppin this shyt yet again... stop sleepin'
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11-24-04, 03:53 PM
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IP: 6F6A 4E01
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
aight both of you are dope a topicals....ummm let me break this down.....anxiety you hd a nice verse yo came really strong in your story and i felt some feeling in it.....Ill-Grammatix i felt you had a great story-line....i felt you put alittle more feeling into it and you had good vocab...so my vote goes to you...but both were great...~1~
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11-24-04, 04:00 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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This was feedback posted for anxiety
IP: 49C0 0F03
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11-24-04, 05:51 PM
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This was feedback posted for anxiety
IP: 8572 D632
checking polls.....................................both stay up
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11-24-04, 06:24 PM
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IP: 9227 0965
werd... thanx Ecko... uppin this shyt once again ...
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11-25-04, 12:34 PM
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IP: 9DD1 2DB9
iggidy uppin this bizzanizzle-itch... werd...lol.... that's the new shyt!... bizzanizzle-itch...i'm wildin'
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11-25-04, 12:50 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: D135 D6AF
Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
A life without freedom isn’t really a life… If I couldn’t be a free man, kill me tonight… 3/10 We take it for granted, but we know is essential… People who aren’t free can never reach their potential… 5/10 Gifts go ignored, when you’re shackled in life… I’m just so thankful, that we tackled the strife… 3/10 Chains and bars, cuffs and ropes… Every one of them can cut ya hopes… 2/10 But more than that, when dreams are suffocated… Ideas are desecrated, instead of demonstrated… 7/10 Everyone can contribute, but most think they’d be ignored… Which is sad because their ideas should be explored… 3/10 To some freedom doesn’t mean to not be chained… But to be listened to thoroughly, and not feel shame… 3/10 Government isn’t the only thing that takes freedom away… It could be a parent to a kid, or a homophobe to a gay… 1/10...No We can be put down, that’s when we need the strength to get back up…. But some just give up, mentally aren’t strong so they just pack up… 2/10 But not me, I’d say Patrick Henry said it best… It’s either, “give me liberty or give me death”… 5/10 This was an ok drop ya wordplay was ok it could of been better it was like u kinda was jumpin around so u need 2have ya vision clear My mental capacity had the audacity to keep asking me how I actually slept at night while I comitted blasphemy 6/10 Naturally, I laughed at the thought of a thought harrassing me Attacking me until reality started surpassing me 5/10 My conscience revealed the contents of an obnoxious Ignoramous trapped in his own cage without a locksmith 7/10 yearnin' to lift the burden...stop the pain, reduce the hurtin' Preferring a higher learnin' than post-existential burnin' 6/10 Now a new man is emergin'... the other dead in the sea setting the scene, becoming what he was destined to be 3/10 That textbook definition of freedom was insufficient Intentionally put together to favor certain conditions 6/10 We're worshipping chains when chains were used when murdering slaves our cars became "whips"... ancestors turning in graves 5/10 See the logic? Our master was replaced by objects The slave quarters of yesterday are today's projects 6/10...Nice concept neglected ... disrespected ... rejected ... and unprotected our psyche has been molested; old wounds became infected 6/10 my aim is to lay claim to my mind and exchange my perceptions by asking questions in countless sessions of life's learning lessons 4/10 then i'll boldly go where no man or no fear can ever hold me and holler out "Kunta Kinte!!!" while the rest still think they're Toby 6/10 nice wordplay nice vision wha u were tryin 2 get across stood out and ya wordplay went well with your vision overall this was a nice topical battle
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11-25-04, 09:28 PM
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IP: 9227 0965
werd.... almost over... holla back so we can end this crap
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11-26-04, 12:48 PM
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I just don't give a fuck!
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IP: 0D01 5ECC
nice verse both....just checkin' the polls...M.A.B takin over!
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11-26-04, 01:48 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
I Gotta Give This One TO ILL-Grammatix Cause He Dropped A Nice Piece With Vocabulary, Structure, Rhyme Scheme and Emotion That Fit Together Perfect. Probably One of The Best Topical Drops I've Seen For A While Besides Mine :-D Vote - Ill Grammatix Hit My Battle Up: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=161927 ~R~ |
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11-26-04, 03:28 PM
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
^You know that uping this for my Boi you heard....
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11-26-04, 07:08 PM
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IP: 9227 0965
werd... uppin this shyt hopefully for the last time... all i need is one... make it count, y'all... werd
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11-26-04, 07:17 PM
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Voted For: Ill-Grammatix
i liked IG's verse better even tho it was pretty flowery and verbose, it flowed well and had a nice logical order to it. but props to both on their verses keep doin ya thing on tha topical jumpoffs. holla at me please http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=161121 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=160091
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