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11-26-04, 09:43 PM
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'Motionless' (RB crossover)
IP: 28AD 5545
Motionless
I'm Still Holding The Track everyday..I say to myself one day. its never gonna come everyday Is someday another brake I won't make another path I won't trace another Train That Come late.. I'm Holding me Back.. I still see the track I made..mixtape outlined in tape.. printed in black marker..and states..by Indeph and Grace.. I guess that's the Fate..I guess I'm the one with just a napkin and a plate..no fork or spoon..a forklift to move Still riding my bike..classmates can take the lack gotta pay for that..then pay for that..then pay for that.. oh shit,I gotta make a RAP!!!..Vocal Records said they take it back how you gonna be a Indian Giver..when you still in the business how you gonna be bitter..when I ghostwrit for you in minutes and I did it plenty..And now I'm banished??and you smiled when they say you had some talent..I'm telling everyone out there if it looks to perfect it probably is..and if you surpassed me then you probably big.. I'm Still Holding The Track everyday..I say to myself one day. its never gonna come everyday Is someday another brake I won't make another path I won't trace another Train That Come late.. I'm Holding me Back.. god damn..how many songs have been saved on the hard drive written in the notebook..and still my tapes not priced..with no hooks help me..K solo spelled me..on his 1st track released..go look Its in his old book..With my baby picture In it..its funny because we he quit..I was beggining..fuck DMX.he stole his printins the difference..between K and me..is no ones payin me then why is it..that I stay in peace..and they stayin G..yo.. I been meaning to grow..the wall marks been surpassed.. I grew Verticle..but inside I'm still in past..Rap's in my grasp.. I mean damn..if you can just see me now..see my frown.. and then see my town..yuo would understand..why I wanna get out.. I just don't see why my raps aint been used yet..I sidelined them because I made a new set.. I'm Still Holding The Track everyday..I say to myself one day. its never gonna come everyday Is someday another brake I won't make another path I won't trace another Train That Come late.. I'm Holding me Back.. -Indeph
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11-26-04, 11:36 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
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11-26-04, 11:39 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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IP: 6A7C EE47
I still see the track I made..mixtape outlined in tape..
printed in black marker..and states..by Indeph and Grace.. I guess that's the Fate..I guess I'm the one with just a napkin and a plate..no fork or spoon..a forklift to move Still riding my bike..classmates can take the lack gotta pay for that..then pay for that..then pay for that.. oh shit,I gotta make a RAP!!!..Vocal Records said they take it back how you gonna be a Indian Giver..when you still in the business how you gonna be bitter..when I ghostwrit for you in minutes and I did it plenty..And now I'm banished??and you smiled when they say you had some talent..I'm telling everyone out there if it looks to perfect it probably is..and if you surpassed me then you probably big.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ON THIS PART I FELT THE SAME THING ON ALL YA OPENMICS DOPE FLOW. DOPE VOCAB'Z..........GOOD CREATIVE SHIT HERE MAYNE I LIKE DIS PART god damn..how many songs have been saved on the hard drive written in the notebook..and still my tapes not priced..with no hooks help me..K solo spelled me..on his 1st track released..go look Its in his old book..With my baby picture In it..its funny because we he quit..I was beggining..fuck DMX.he stole his printins the difference..between K and me..is no ones payin me then why is it..that I stay in peace..and they stayin G..yo.. I been meaning to grow..the wall marks been surpassed.. I grew Verticle..but inside I'm still in past..Rap's in my grasp.. I mean damn..if you can just see me now..see my frown.. and then see my town..yuo would understand..why I wanna get out.. I just don't see why my raps aint been used yet..I sidelined them because I made a new set.. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ON THIS PART PRETTY MUCH THE SAME BUT WITH MORE EMOTIONS BEING ADDED HOMIE........NICE YO U HAD NICE VOCAB'Z...........NICE FLOW................GOOD CREATIVE SHIT...............NICE EMOTIONS............9/10 YO DROP AN FEEDBACK IN MY OPEN MIC YES INDEPTH IAM TRYING TO BE LIKE U LOL DROPPIN OM'Z DAILY LOL "DISS TO THIS KID AT SKOOL-SMOKE" THATS DA NAME OF MY OM CHECK IT FEED IT FEEL IT
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11-26-04, 11:43 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
LOL..Quoted....
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11-26-04, 11:44 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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IP: 6A7C EE47
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Muwhahahahahahahahahahahah Aiiiiight Fam Be Nice
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11-27-04, 12:13 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
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11-27-04, 12:22 AM
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Back....
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IP: D80D 91A2
Indeph you a male or female..............
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11-27-04, 12:24 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
shit..BOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
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11-27-04, 12:38 AM
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IP: C458 B454
Good Drop I Was Feeling It The Whole Way..
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11-27-04, 12:44 AM
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Back....
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IP: D80D 91A2
BOYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY Aw kay my bad forthinking youur a girl. lol srry.
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11-27-04, 02:57 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
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11-27-04, 03:12 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
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11-27-04, 03:13 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
this was a good drop 8.4/10...i should give you this instead of food for thought for the open mic fo the mounth....good job homes
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11-27-04, 03:42 PM
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IP: 7DA2 2B9E
indepth...... that shit was dope.... i could feel what you were sayin.... shit.... man that hits close to home.... just props to indepth
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11-27-04, 07:19 PM
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Puttin MD On The Map
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IP: 408D D2A2
damn man nice drop had lots of emotion nie vocab and great flow.....your always on top of your game no matter what u write.....
keep it up fam....9/10 peace~1
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