i thought this was dope when i wrote it... but now that i llok at it it sux... o well. ill post it anyways.

<Verse 1>
im considered such a disgace, out 2 provoke all these young kids/
im just a dangerous weapon, yo, im an artist, ha, fuck this/
"shes terrible" yo, wut it? i guess i should start staight off, im makin this public/
im more ammo fillin up this criminal minds/
look at the impact of all these minimal lines/
they seem 2 make such subliminal crimes, but instead of government blastin me, im directed towards children this time/
the innocence of little boys and girl, now captured by 9mm still/
worshipin my tape like the bible, blastin heaters 2 b ill/
thinkin rugged thoughts, prayin 2 god they dont git caught/
then their mother figures it out and im the 1 with fault/
this cd has a sticker, meaning this tapes 4 young adults/
so these kids gotta git their hands on it and keep it bottled up/
then the senete gets his senses and throws me nother case/
if u got a problem with my openess, then say it 2 my face/
another girl gets raped and the attention lands on me/
i might spit sum retarted shit, but im not all that phony/
the drug dog comes 2 skool and ur child's caught with weed/
admits the fact she bought me tape, and a war is fought on me/
my influence is from expereince, i dont just make it up/
im gitting 2 the boiling point where i just dont give a fuck/
u cant change my past as much as i cant change my thoughts/
its not like innocence is a victim, its not after them ive sought/
its not like i can but them weed, i cant verbally roll their blunts/
so from now on when u got a testimony, git the facts 2 back it up!

<chorus>
this life aint no poloroid picture
this life aint no poloroid picture
this life aint no poloroid picture
this life aint no poloroid picture

<Verse 2>
the poin im makin here is that this bush administration/
is preparing 2 file lawsuits with every pencil im breakin/
im not gonna change my style just 2 please a herd of dicks/
this is sick, i cant believe my fans are loyal 2 those tricks/
so file all ur court apperals before i really jump the gun/
cause any other negetive smirk i get, im gonna hit n run/
i aint leavin media no trace of any shit ima put out yet/
this hadknock life has opened doors, my minds an open set/
i still got a whole lot more to say, dont think i left u hangin/
u can nod ur head and agree with me, but u have no clue 2 wut im sayin/
my intellegence has risen high, im gettin more clever everyday/
my rhymes r witty 4 a female, best listen 2 the words i say/
so fuck this nation and all its followers who blame rappers 4 their bad kids/
look inside ur childs skool and ull c y ive really had this/
ill keep on sellin records if i have 2 go Black Market/
ive found my place, im settlin down, this is destiny, ima park it/
ill never touch another pen if im forced against my will/
try 2 pencil in the words i think, homie, u gon end up killed!

<chorus>
this life aint no poloroid picture
(fuckin govenment)
this life aint no poloroid picture
(they have no idea about my life)
this life aint no poloroid picture
(blame me 4 shit i never did)
this life aint no poloroid picture
(ima change their minds 4 good)

<Verse 3>
this real life is so sick, no 1 relizes where we at/
we as rappers tearin down our fronts, throwing out everything we have/
i could b in juvi right now, but instead im spittin truth/
i wont let no prima donnas take me down, im planted in this booth/
govenment is breathing down our necks, gotta git facts, they mean buisness/
i dont wannna cause another Rally Of Hate* but if this aint hardcore, wut is it?/
im 4 womens rights, havin been there all along/
i wana make a difference, its not 2 late 2 right my wrongs/
i aint a bad kid, just gotta lot down on my mind/
im a discace 2 women kind, but if i was born wit a dick, then shit would b fine/
prostitution is against the law, yet still porn threads seem 2 b legal/
get locked in jail 4 "hooking up" now tell me, wuts wrong witht these ppl?/
i have followers that hear me out, yet the senete isnt pleased/
wut i gotta get thru 2 yall? beg on my hands and knees???/
bush, if i sucked ur dick would u give my voice sum thought?/
if i flashed my bum and made u cum, would my cd have been bought?/
im not that desperate 4 attention, im just tryin 2 prove my point/
it aint my fault 2 every kid who lights another joint/
i dont had out drugs n give out guns, i cant grab them by the neck/
take their hands and make them shoot, im just lookin 4 respect/
so if i ever sell coke 2 tots n make em inhale thru their nose/
u can complain then, but in the mean n inbetween time, ima keep omn bringin flows

<chorus>
this life aint no poloroid picture
(its the truth)
this life aint no poloroid picture
(shit happens, i have no control)
this life aint no poloroid picture
(hey, its just MY opinion)
this life aint no poloroid picture
(not that that matters)
this life aint no poloroid picture
this life aint no poloroid picture
this life aint no poloroid picture
this life aint no poloroid picture

FUCk

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can i get sum critism????

o and the *= Rally Of Hate gainst eminem and his lyrics.... during a concert. around the MMPL time period

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wont anyone post nuttin???? i wanna know if u agree if this is shupid ish...... i think it is. i need critism

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its ok...... not the best, but keep working..................

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..:The Greatest Of Our Time:..

thank ya......................... holla

im uppin this thread!!!!

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uppin PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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pretty good,kind of reminded me of my old lyrics back in 7th grade. keep it up. oh and return the favor in my sig.vote honestly

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i wrote this a while ago... im only in 8th,,, ima keep working. pz

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ok its good nat the best ive seen in here but damn you only in *th Greade good for the age but good man good.

not bad u wrote it in ur 8th grade so keep elevatin man sounds like some of the shyt i wrote in school lol but u know what to do now man uppit upp ur levels upp your confidence upp everythin man u got it nice job good flows n decent vocab I got a hott track collab with MistahTate too so watch out for that shyt man its gonna b off the chain........

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not bad u wrote it in ur 8th grade so keep elevatin man sounds like some of the shyt i wrote in school lol but u know what to do now man uppit upp ur levels upp your confidence upp everythin man u got it nice job good flows n decent vocab I got a hott track collab with MistahTate too so watch out for that shyt man its gonna b off the chain........

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wow.... i didnt think id git such POSOTIVE feedback.... its not really up 2 my personal standards, but i got time 2 improve. thanx 4 the luv

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uppin this again........................... please read

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