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Old 08-01-02, 01:32 PM   #1
LiL DruNkie
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Red Dye

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Can i hold it back any longer?
the light will reflect n make it shine
you can see deep down its darkness
watch how the red roses grow on the sharp edges
so peaceful,so beautiful...
a place which the ride to there is inscapable when the life is low,
as i lay on that edge,i feel a little pain cos of the fatigue,
and suddenly i see infront of me a kid,playing with his ball,
with his tricycle hitting the road
all this time keep on laughing,n now he stands up
a girl comes and goes,n he cries...
his tears turn red...start soaking his clothes...
the tears form a paddle...he falls on his knees,
theres no halo,he's just a red dye on the street...
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Old 08-02-02, 08:55 AM   #2
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This had alot of depth to it ...
had to read ova ... to see tha tru meanin ...

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Old 08-02-02, 12:23 PM   #3
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hmm pretty decent..wait i remember this name!! haha....hmm someones not been too active....but nice drop..much luv..God bless.1...
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Old 08-02-02, 03:15 PM   #4
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yo dis thing is hott. keep postin!!. much respect. uno
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