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Old 11-28-04, 04:28 PM   #1
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can't stop this pain inside I can't find a way to hide
I'm all alone but people don't understand my real side
I can't take this shit I feel I got this constant hate
I Wish i could change my past so I could change my fate
im forever falling and when I do theres no one there calling
Situations get out of control and then I end up brawling
my lifes hard to take especially with all of my hate
even when I feel the sudden tention in my life to break
So is there gonna be a tomorrow wid out any pain and sorrow
I get angry with these days cuz I h8 to be the person to follow
My thoughts are always pure I use them for my fire for fuel
I'm rappin my song on this website that an't worth shit at all
So give me Your state of mind cuz everyones got one of a kind
if mine was exposed you'd get shined and it'll prob make ya blind
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Old 11-29-04, 08:24 AM   #2
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pretty hott man good structure and flow keep it goin i dunno why nobody fed this one i think its decent cept for the length but its short n sweet mang i liked "i cant take all this shyt i feel i got this constant hate, i wish i could change my past so i could change my fate" that was hott man i got a collab comin with mistahtate too so watch out for that too peace homie

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Old 11-29-04, 02:03 PM   #3
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