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Old 11-29-04, 02:54 AM   #1
THE HYPE IS REAL
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diss to 2 by FAG

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you thought you got me with that dundee line
been patiently waitin bidin my time
harass you smash you but still leave you alive
cause were like a team you and me
you give me the energy that i need to proceed in this game
but didnt join this here just to get me some fame
i come to this desk with nothin but praise
then one day just out of the blu must off had nothin to do
and i got this beef but it aint from the street but on the computer with a fuckin 14 year old geek
just listen im not a computer man
just a freak that produced by these streets
dont need no beat if im a spit some to ya
i just flip it and rip till you aint got a fuckin clue ma
so with that ill finish this verse just remeber you started it first
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Old 11-29-04, 03:18 AM   #2
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wasnt feelin it at all...
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Old 11-29-04, 08:21 AM   #3
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nah what he said u need to work on ur structure and add some metas or suttin man jus dont be addinw ack disses to this fukken forum put some decent shyt in here even if it doest have a subject jus work on ur rhymes and flow and metas as a newwb man
all good tho keep uppin peace man i got a collab comin with mistahtate too so watch out for that too

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i know you wish you never battled me but its too late faggot
im packing punches and they don’t come in Kool-Aid packets
damn.. merkin shyt here mang... tight structure.. on point


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162918
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=162997

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