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12-06-04, 09:27 PM
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a verse from my drinkin song
IP: 7696 4EB2
this is just a verse from my song called "I Drink" (
 )verse 1: i drink till my liver collapse (yup) gulpin all night then tha next day i cant relax mixin so much chemicals, i'll kill myself but i share tha wealth so i kill others and myself and when im gone, im a hotbox fuck round and have a glock in tha club and im bustin off shots im so not sober on tha regular i got Gin, Grey Goose, and Vodka mixed up waitin for ya and before you sip this, let me warn you you betta be sure bout what exactly im givin to you shit i dont measure, i guess man i be sippin as im trippin off dis Bicardi Li`mon man so i dumb out and if im hittin a bitch tonight, i strap up nigga you know what im bout cuz raw fuckin aint my style homes man im tipsy, put tha hook back on...nigga im gone ***i know its simple but i like it cuz its true. i need some feedback! please***
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12-07-04, 02:28 PM
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IP: 964F D870
a nigga cant get better if a nigga dont get advice. 4real
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12-07-04, 03:02 PM
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IP: 11AF 50EC
yea it is simple but u got some mad vocab words in there, u can WORK on ur multies a lil bit, punches werent SO bad lol not too bad for a new RV member n REALLY not to bad 4 a MI boi
 , keep reppin D n keep spittin......8.5/10 |
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