|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
12-07-04, 11:17 PM
|
#1
|
||||||||
|
mess with me get cooked
|
When I Die........
IP: 3328 1948
CHORUSX1
When I die hopefully I will leave stories behind When I die I’ll leave people with tears in there eyes When I die, I’ll leave my family emotionally skard When I die, I wont complain when I’ve made it this far Sitting in my studio making dope tracks, produce them in stores, also soled out many stores I drop tracks from the deep in my soul, that’s why I got popularity, that’s why my shit is cold I never drop something that don’t make me, I spit things from my pupil, the things I see Why u think the people on the streets are struggling giving me props cause they have seen You can call me nas the spoken writer, story teller, people know that my shit aint fiction I speak from within, I know I aint god, but I’m releasing the streets deadly lethal sins I’m here to give these people, an replenish of what’s going on in the hood, the trouble My people been through. Most artiest try to do what I do, but they always…… fumble Haters always try To take me out, but sometimes i got to take the gun from the shelf Make there bodies an blood see through lingerie, but my mind gots to be stealth These haters is creative than an famous art painter, I gots to be an top thinker I got to watch my back, in every direction, cause one bullet can be my life sinker But I’ve out-smarted them, have they’ve heard me, do they know my tracks are dope once I die, I’ll leave tears falling,, my family emotionally skard, but I’ve gotten this far Haters will still hate me, my dope tracks will leaving stories to be TOLD~! CHORUSX2 When I die hopefully I will leave stories behind When I die I’ll leave people with tears in there eyes When I die, I’ll leave my family emotionally skard When I die, I wont complain when I’ve made it this far
__________________
 THE SLEEP & THE DREAM- Quote:
SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!  P.S.A COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM |
||||||||
|
|
|
12-07-04, 11:22 PM
|
#2
|
||||
|
IP: 3240 794D
played topic..but pretty good content..
I like most of the lines in the middle more..you got better as It went on...and judgin the closer..your as cocky as me  but I'm more so...I give it a 7.99999999/10 damn poetic MC's stealin my style  lol peace fam keep droppin or else
__________________
The Competition
 |
||||
|
|
|
12-07-04, 11:25 PM
|
#3
|
||||||
|
New to RV
|
IP: 7C2C 2029
sweet rhymes....keep it up
|
||||||
|
|
|
12-08-04, 01:50 AM
|
#4
|
||||||
|
New to RV
|
IP: 7D11 8CB8
i liked the plot for real but i would suggest droppin more punch lines and put a lil excitement into the verse....other than that , i think u doin well
__________________
 
|
||||||
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
