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12-13-04, 05:35 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
IP: A0F2 0238
checkin polls......................................
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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12-16-04, 10:34 AM
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~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
^^^up...up......uppin' away!!!
the super duper...c.s.
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 QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE  "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown  R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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12-18-04, 12:04 PM
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~SAINT SINNER~
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IP: 0825 899A
^^^up...up......uppin' away!!!
the super duper...c.s.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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12-19-04, 01:01 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
Voted For: CriTiC
SuperVilain: i had no clue you write all these lines that dont make sense...but no hate but you need elevation work on the wordplay try using a better flow to in your verse because you kinda fucked uo on the flow a bit...the stucture was iight kinda fell a little bit towards the middle...but stucture was good..overal...7.2/10 Critic: not the best ive seen from you but it was pretty dope...nice use of multis and vocabulary...nice wordplay in your lines very well done stucture with a super good flow with it to...nice verse is all i can say you take this with ease... Vote: Critic return the favour here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=159763 hopefully you understand my punches cuz half the people dont.. |
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12-20-04, 08:10 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Thanks for the votes people uping this for close.
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01-07-05, 08:56 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Uping,,,...............................
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02-03-05, 08:27 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Uping this pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee,.................... .....................
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02-08-05, 08:12 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Uping for votes !!!
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03-03-05, 07:53 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Uping for votes please!!! Lop top battery coming this week!!!
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03-07-05, 08:52 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
Bumping for close come on people this has been open since november last year!!
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03-08-05, 06:00 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 997D A94C
Voted For: CriTiC
Supervillian: your stucture was alright but not as great as expected your imagery was alright coulda been ebtter vocab was pretty damn weak the emotion was ight but coulda been way better the flow was ight coulda been better but really work on creativty and write to amuse others not just to be ya know, pz Critic: well you overal had better everythign but i was really feeling your nice vocab great imagery the stucture was super great the emotion was so good and the flow was flawless ahha, if there is ever a topical touney and theres partners or somin i want you to be mine. but keep doin ya thing and get my pm its parallel pz RTF in my battle with speats links in the sig Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Already vote in battle as Parallel. |
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03-08-05, 10:37 PM
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IP: CF4E 8780
Voted For: CriTiC
nice drops on both sides. critic. i really felt your structure and word play.. you had really good vocab and eveything went smooth. niiiiice job on this one.. .. i liked yours so much because it was honest and it was real.. nice vocab. metas. and rhyme scheme supervillain.. also a very nice drop .. only thing was ur lines were to stretched which affected the overalll flow.. critic had a really good flow.. your structure was off key.. otherwise a very nice drop .. it just didnt have all the honesty that critics did nice drop on both parts Vote//Critic
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03-10-05, 08:21 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
SV you yonked my victory, haha thats not a dick ride vote man
but it's kool up~ing 1~ |
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03-10-05, 10:02 AM
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IP: E440 2D41
^^^this ones for you crit.....lol.....UPPIN'!!!^^^
s.v.
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QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection??? ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE "I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love. |
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03-11-05, 08:12 AM
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Black Poet
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IP: 2041 AFC0
ha ha shit I didn't relize it was the same person voting good call
sorry hungover yesterday,... Uping !!! |
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