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12-24-04, 09:31 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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My Christmas
IP: A34C 61B2
*This Was Keyed, due to me just being in the mood* My Christmas Sorrounded by children's laughter, crumbled gift wrappers.. At this very moment, familly is the only thing that matters.. The smell of the Christmas Tree, The room filled with Joy.. Children's day's made worth while, all cuz of one small toy.. For dinner is the roast chicken with warm mash potatoes.. Don't forget the Honey Baked ham, fully covering the table.. It's like heaven on earth, everyone's face with happy expressions... Especially when all my love ones recieve their christmas presents.. This is what i believe, how you should always feel in Christmas... Since what I've showed you was what I wrote in my santa's wishlist.. *I know it's short but please leave feedback*
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12-25-04, 12:24 AM
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Hell yeah
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IP: FD58 E3D6
damn man...pretty fucking dope lol
Structure:9/10 flow: 9/10 vocab:10/10 Imagination  nce again : 9/10dope ... keep writting seriously... |
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12-25-04, 03:10 AM
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'Member Those Golden Days
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IP: 23DA 1D3E
good. keep it up
 peep mine as well. Unmatched Giftsstructure: 8/10 imagination: 8/10 vocab: 8.5/10 |
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01-07-05, 02:07 AM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 8D5B 2407
uppin..............
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01-18-05, 03:49 PM
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Odi et Amo
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IP: EA7F 8314
Awwwww, i wish it was Xmas again...Emotion was good, vocab was okay...liked how you described it in such a vivid way...good short drop!
DQ
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