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IP: ED58 7340
i create quakes just watch this Place-Shift
pick ya up by ya nose so you can get a Face-Lift just Face-It, ill leave you fucking wasted creating pain, hit ya with luggage just to Incase-It my crews like the taliban cause they bring Mass-Terror and leaving ya eyes black and blue like maskera you think you can beat me? you Silly-Hoe but Really-Though.. you bitches are more fake than silicone i cook more cats than asian chefs punches to your ear, make ya go deaf im tight on the mic, just say i have rigamortis and i plow down everything in my path like clinton portis if you want a victory against me you better neel and Pray-For-It you want a freestyle, i make you Pay-For-It |
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IP: ED58 7340
uppin for some fucking feedback for once.
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: 2EF7 A767
dis was tight 2 mayne.......yo pm me back bout dat offer dawg
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IP: ED58 7340
thanks but can you all please explain for feed a little better? thanks.
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 3240 794D
You Got To Understand Most People Here Are Garbage.Theyre Just Intersted In Getting Peeps In A Crew.
OK Verse.Vocab Was Good, No Overused And Thats Always A Plus.Punches Werent That Hard And Alot Simple But They Got The Point Across.I'd Give It A 3/5 Which Is Better Than99.9% Of These Pricks On Here. |
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IP: ED58 7340
^lol.
uppin for more feedback on this. |
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IP: ED58 7340
^lol.
uppin for more feedback on this shit and please explain your feed a little better. |
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Whys That?
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IP: 4257 B15B
this is ok, some allright multi's in it. good flow.
remember your link's. return the feed,check the sig. |
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IP: ED58 7340
return the feed? what 3 lines?? fuck that.
uppin for explained feedback |
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Whys That?
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IP: 4257 B15B
i create quakes just watch this Place-Shift
pick ya up by ya nose so you can get a Face-Lift ^^ allright multi's, bar's a good length. just Face-It, ill leave you fucking wasted creating pain, hit ya with luggage just to Incase-It ^^^ another nice multi, again a good bar length my crews like the taliban cause they bring Mass-Terror and leaving ya eyes black and blue like maskera ^^^ good attempt at a multi,ok similie's you think you can beat me? you Silly-Hoe but Really-Though.. you bitches are more fake than silicone ^^ ok bar, good multi, first line a bit stretched though. i cook more cats than asian chefs punches to your ear, make ya go deaf ^line's a bit wak, just the cooking cat's part I wasnt really feeling. im tight on the mic, just say i have rigamortis and i plow down everything in my path like clinton portis ^^^ ok bar if you want a victory against me you better neel and Pray-For-It you want a freestyle, i make you Pay-For-It ^^medium closer,could of come a bit stronger with it. overall- flow-8/10 rhyme's-7/10 structure-6/10 ...... return the feed. |
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