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Old 01-04-05, 10:50 PM   #1
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Love HAtes Me...
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Love, where can I go? Without ya Warm Touch
and shelter Im left out in the Cold..

Love,what should I do? How can I go on live
without the love of you...

Love,I feel so so betrayed!
I was told once I discover you I discover peace
but all I feel is Pain!

Love,this torture is too much I cannot bear
The cliff of insanity I am approaching with the mere thought of you not being there!

Love,your a hoax not even close to what i thought you would be
All my life I've been hoping and searching 4 you
now that I found you ..You dont want me....

Why dont you want me?
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Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-05-05, 10:34 AM   #2
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good drop...had good emotion in it...sometimes i feel like that 2 but eventually u'll find somebody and you'll know its right...i like the 3rd part in this. i like how it flowed together. it all flowed good but i really like that 3rd part. pc
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Old 01-05-05, 12:07 PM   #3
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actually i married man i just wrote this piece because i know its a individaul out there that feels this way or has felt this way and im just reachin out to those people i have felt this weay before inthe past though
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-05-05, 10:17 PM   #4
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i think we have all felt that way at one point or another
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Old 01-05-05, 11:10 PM   #5
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thanx for the feed back man ...........................................
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-12-05, 09:57 AM   #6
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thanx for the feed back man ...........................................
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-12-05, 05:42 PM   #7
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nice drop man.....married..how old are ya......but back ot the poem.....this was nice.....i like the approach and scheme you used in this......flow was good.....it had great emotion.....keep it up man......rtf....links in sig
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Old 01-13-05, 01:20 PM   #8
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im 21 thanx for the feed back...............!
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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