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yvonne vs phive
IP: 2AF4 5C39
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 06:55 PM.
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IP: 2142 B680
Yvonne has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 07:02 PM.
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IP: 2142 B680
freestyle mayne..
now fuck spittin 10 i'ld still bust ya head with Phive got ur heart throbin outta fear..at least u feel d jive i wonder y u aint out seelin crack..herre ya brain'll sparck ud gain money dan u'd do from rap..'cep u wan' a mack lil kid trynna spit hard,i'ld say props for the thought but as it is u a re-tard,ur flows are gein' a deep cut i think u just a wanksta u'd shit in front of a glock my lines r eletronic and my wins gonna gi' u a shock we all know u a pranksta gettin fame from hoppn' on cock if u get 1 atleast we know u as an elton pal on d block
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Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
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Now That's Wassup! |
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IP: 2142 B680
boy try postin ya verse now....
today... lets make this thing fast... 1 |
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
This bitch wants ta battle a real man thats crazy, maybe cuz she makes money sucking dick cuz shes lazy, i spit bars of heat, my rap styles neat, anyone who follows in yvonnes steps gets athletes feet,
yo imma school this bitch like a fat kid on a bike, this bitch sucks cock, and shes a dyke, yvonne why would you pick me ta battle, cuz you know ill fuck you harder than a cowboy with out a saddle, this bitch could probably deepthroat an apple, your pussy probably tastes like cum infected snapple, i cant hit a girl but your the closest ive came, i leave you at 0-1 in this rap game, dont feel shame, cuz im ta blame, youve messed with phive now yo slain, im tha rap king, i rap you sing, your wearing gold plated im rocking bling bling, ill knock you out in battle and take you in the ring, whats it like to live with std's, and watch stolen tv's, while ive got money in my pocket and going to tha movies, im gettin fucked by groupies, while your in tha back givin niggas head on two knees, i could bust you in one bar, leave you an 0-1 scar, you try ta warm things up on me im burning you like hot tar, my lyrics are magical and at a fast pace, while ive got nice hair youve got cum plastered on ya face, i rap with a certain humerous style, i can rhyme a mile, we might be the same shit but your in the stinky pile, you think you can just battle anyone well i guess you can, your not a nigga bitch youve just got a shitty tan, i run this game like i own you bitch and your bitches, when i fucked you slut you needed 40 stitches, while im warm at home, you roll around in ditches,
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
shut up bitch you had that shit prolly written phive times in a binder
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
lets get some votes in here people ill vote for your shit too
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Yvonne
I vote for Yvonne cuz tha drop was cold she called him out as soon as she stated an didn't let up. Tha Wordplay is tha shit an tha structure is something I could marry its so damn beautiful
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IP: 2F44 F22B
yo phive i aint in the mood to net fight or w/e...this is just a damn battle...whatever comes outta ya opponents mouth is to be taken son...so chill...u called me a bitch and i aint mad wichu cos i know im clean..at least ya moma and ya "gurl" aint...
some votes peeps plz...
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Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
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IP: A913 F2E5
uppin this shit peeps comon'
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Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
you dumb bitch nigga you gettin your dumb ass fuck buddies ta vote for ya this is bull shit i ruined you bitch you bars dont make sense at all
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IP: A913 F2E5
just a quest....are u black?...and for ya info i aint a guy...get a fuckin pair of glasses and look at my sig,avy and name...
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Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
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Now That's Wassup! |
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IP: 2AF4 5C39
i know you aint a guy you fucking moron did i say that you fuck slut no im white
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Odi et Amo
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IP: C9A2 1C80
Voted For: Yvonne
First of all, phive should be DQ'ed cause that ain't 10 lines man! But lemme break down your verse anyway... Your structure was terrible! Fix that to make it more readable! You had some real nice lines in there but most of them were mad played and you kept on bringing yourself up, don't do that... Lemme give you an example of what you shouldn't use: im tha rap king, i rap you sing, your wearing gold plated im rocking bling bling, ill knock you out in battle and take you in the ring, ^wack this bitch could probably deepthroat an apple, your pussy probably tastes like cum infected snapple, ^thats uhm better ya see? Just try to get those wack lines and self-glorification outta ya system and you'll be fine... Now Yvonne's verse...your structure,flow n vocab were tight. Had some good punches in there but also a few fillers n self-glorification but i kno you still warmin up so its all good...Get back to it gurl, keep on battling n shit...Was definately feeling your closer, had sum good stuff in there...
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