Lemme give some feed on another dope drop...

First of all, the topic has been done before probably and yet, you managed to give it an original vibe. Your vocab was excellent, no complex dictionary words but no basic stuff either...found a good balance there. Was feeling your flow, the structure was tight too. I absolutely LOVED the twist at the ending, the emotion was so raw. Easy to relate to because everyone must've experienced this in some sort of way, not being able to let someone go...

Good job! Keep on dropping, I'll be looking forward to reading it!

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DAYUM..this yorkshire cat hotter thn i thought...battles is one thing..but i prefer this real shit...the emotion was crazy..real deep..we all been there...vocab was good..structure was excellent....managed to put a good twist into the topic..very creative how u set it out too...nice drop..i enjoyed it....ama prolly read more of ya stuff nah....leave some feed in my what is life open mic...sorry didnt leave a link..but just go find it for ya boy...keep droppin hotness like this mayne...pz

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Living Legendz

I Promise Alot...But I Deliver Alot More...

...Topicals...

What Is Life?

Dark Disguise

lol..ma bad...links in ma sig.......bump..

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Living Legendz

I Promise Alot...But I Deliver Alot More...

...Topicals...

What Is Life?

Dark Disguise

Thanks for the feed yo, always good to get your shit Critted like that.

And its funny how the haters stay away from my OM's, lol.

Bump, And I'll RTF now Idyllic.

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whats that sposto mean?

Thats what your name is foo'

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