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Old 01-27-05, 01:42 PM   #1
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I get out of ma bed and im walkin to ma car.....
n by far i knew it was night becuz of da starz..
So im driving while the skyz gettin brighter..........
Smoke goes in n out of mouth n fire goes back in da lighter......
Im gettin outta ma car n outta da trunk i grab da shotty.........
im runnin n i start seein blood goin back into a body........
lookz like some guy was dead, shirt was all red.......
N outta now where five bullets fly toward me from his head....
so im runnin wit a gun in, ma hand da plan.....
was to kill a man form japan cuz he killed ma fam.....
Well now im in a room n a chick walk in.........
Numbers are erasing from a paper as dis chicks talkin....
N im smackin her ass while she suckin ma shit........
den cum flies off of her face and into ma dick...
And as shes talkin some shit a bra fly right on her tits....
now im walkin wit dis bitch ,im real full n i spot a store....
a guy pushes me n i notice its da same guy i shot before....
Im in da store store spittin snickers back into da pack its funny.....
N i felt like a dummy, cuz afta dat i was hungry.....(i was on drugs n everything was backwards)uppin dis 1
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Old 01-27-05, 01:44 PM   #2
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Improve ya grammar nigga.
Make words longer.
Do me a sig.
Improve your structure.
Do me a sig.
Get yo mojo on point.
Do me a sig.
Improve your vocab.
Do me a sig.
And thats how i feel you can improve.
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Old 01-27-05, 02:37 PM   #3
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up your vocab an complexity it was basic...
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