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02-03-05, 07:48 PM | #1 | |||
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Loving you is Wrong...(I Don't Wanna Be Right)
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02-03-05, 10:52 PM | #2 | ||||
Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
pretty good song mate. nice chilling shit. dope beat! fuck yeah beat is sick same as the chorus. couldnt have gone wrong with it. your voice is good for this kind of track. lyrics were good, delivery yeah all that was good.
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02-04-05, 01:43 AM | #3 | |||
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thanks for the feedback.....
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02-04-05, 01:59 AM | #4 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Send Me The Beat And Hook Hocake
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02-04-05, 06:53 AM | #5 | ||||||
FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: 28BD 9D87
LOL @ this porno beat
hahahaa...and ur singing was nice at the beginning Ecko LOL... awwwwwwww u love me baby! YEEEEEEEEEEES! I love ur voice mayne...sexy...uh huh! yes...! if I was a girl, I'd be moist like those chocolate chip cookies with the broken edges ahuheuhi-98321y583 Flow was nice...delivery was good I liked it Hot |
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02-04-05, 05:06 PM | #6 | |||||||
No Relation To Tina
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IP: EB8D 9EAC
yea nice beat here.....flow was pretty good....it was on point.......delivery was pretty good also.....i liked the track....i enjoyed listening to it......good shit.....
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02-04-05, 05:08 PM | #7 | |||||||
Let God Be With You
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IP: 2437 C278
beat is sick same as the chorus. couldnt have gone wrong with it. your voice is good for this kind of track. lyrics were good, delivery yeah all that was good.
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02-04-05, 06:55 PM | #8 | |||
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IP: D286 FEFE
Thanks for the feedback....lets get more
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02-04-05, 10:12 PM | #9 | |||||||
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IP: E1EE 8560
dope track mayne no doubt, definately put together nicely and beat fit...... nuffin bad to say too hot stay doin ya thing and i hope to found out theres some kats on here doin the real not jus doin this as a hobby........mr crooks gone watch and see cuz theres potential.... gotta be comfortable with yaself and what you do and you dun well at that this time........
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02-04-05, 11:17 PM | #10 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 2FD5 47F6
I'm liking this one. I think your vocals could have been raised a little on the first verse. Shit was nice though.....you flowed pretty well throughout. Definately feeling the beat. Chorus was alright, but I wasn't really feeling how it skips and shit. It just sounded too fake. Not really sure what that means, but that's what I thought. Good job though man. I look forward to some more collabs with your bitchass
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02-05-05, 12:41 AM | #11 | |||||||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: E63C BFED
This shit really suits your vocals. You really hit the nail on the head with this one ecko, this is good shit. Damn, I love this damn beat, definatly a beat you could fuck to.. Lyrics were pretty nice too..
Props for this shit. |
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02-05-05, 04:03 AM | #12 | |||||||
Ask About Me
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IP: 98E5 6E5E
this was nice....no hate but i aint really feeling your voice....you got a gangsta type of voice and that just aint my style...but oyu doing oyur thing....keep making these nice tracks........if you was more of a liad back type of style it would have went better with the beat......you got your flow down...and your voice but you need to work on oyur lyrics...you got everythin gbut hot lyrics....dont get me wrong they is nice but if oyu wanna be the best improve your lyrics...all in all nice shit....
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02-05-05, 06:02 PM | #13 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 3B27 2020
This was a pretty good track..... although flow and lyric wise, it was all downhill after the first verse..... i think the first verse was the best and pretty dope, and than after that the second verse was good, but it had some lil meesups flow wise, and u rushed a few bars and mumbled alil bit at one or two lines..... and than the third verse i thought had allotta ruched lines, and the "three to tango" part juss sounded alil off and weird to me
pretty dope track tho....... the hook was pretty good, and i like that beat for the track and ur voice over that beat sounds pretty good..... this was a decent track, but juss look over ur last two verses to see if u should rerecord em and take a few words out on some of the bars. |
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02-08-05, 07:58 PM | #14 | |||
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song is updated.../...
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